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4/30/2013 c1 2dcflag
Really liked the idea of the story. Would perhaps get rid of the last sentence, I don't think it needs it, The premise is really original, I love little shorts like this and I'm glad I read this.
4/29/2013 c1 102Kathryn Claire O'Connor
Interesting... Good job here.:)
4/28/2013 c1 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Last line, so true. :) Very few mistakes, really minor this time.

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