
2/26/2014 c3 The Girl With The Ankle Tattoo
"and eventually we'll get to a place where we won't feel bad anymore" Freakin love those lines!
"and eventually we'll get to a place where we won't feel bad anymore" Freakin love those lines!
2/16/2014 c4
66forgottenwords7
Your poems are truly captivating, the structure and imagery really pull you into the words you've crafted here. I'll definitely finish reading the rest of these :)

Your poems are truly captivating, the structure and imagery really pull you into the words you've crafted here. I'll definitely finish reading the rest of these :)
10/27/2013 c14
173Little girl Big world
love this. so simple but the words hold a lot of meaning. great work :)

love this. so simple but the words hold a lot of meaning. great work :)
8/4/2013 c11 recycle rhymes
I especially liked this chapter of your pillowbook, the first stanza is stunning and it left me wanting more.
I especially liked this chapter of your pillowbook, the first stanza is stunning and it left me wanting more.
7/6/2013 c10 Little girl Big world
this is truly astounding. i love reading your poetry.
the closing line is my favorite, very easy for me to relate to.
this is truly astounding. i love reading your poetry.
the closing line is my favorite, very easy for me to relate to.
6/13/2013 c1 w
and what is with the disguised moon?
;SSSSSSSSSSS
and what is with the disguised moon?
;SSSSSSSSSSS
6/13/2013 c1 w
If that's me, what am I?
what is the star like inside me?
or there isn't one?
or it isn't a star?
hmm 希望我沒有自作多情xp
如果有的話, 告訴我, 沒關係的
if you are not talking about me.
what's the night inside you for?
this one puzzled me.
i am puzzled.
(as always)
If that's me, what am I?
what is the star like inside me?
or there isn't one?
or it isn't a star?
hmm 希望我沒有自作多情xp
如果有的話, 告訴我, 沒關係的
if you are not talking about me.
what's the night inside you for?
this one puzzled me.
i am puzzled.
(as always)
5/31/2013 c9
173Little girl Big world
i wanted to pick out my favorite lines, but the whole thing is just amazing i couldn't pick just a few lines.
excellent piece here. this is my favorite so far :)

i wanted to pick out my favorite lines, but the whole thing is just amazing i couldn't pick just a few lines.
excellent piece here. this is my favorite so far :)