11/16/2014 c1 5stupidsilence
This is amazing. I mean, seriously, the whole story is fantastic. It has a kind of melancholy, reminiscent tone to it, which I love. And wow, he painted her? He's an artist? That's really cool. I mean, kinda weird, but cool. And the fact that they're getting married is sweet.

I especially liked the ending, where she gave the guy an umbrella. It has a sort of charm to it that I know I wouldn't have thought to add.

Thanks for writing!

5/4/2013 c1 cravingforCrave
This is beautiful. Ryan is so sweet. 3 Just a while ago, it rained here in my country. People were walking without umbrellas! I hope someone like Ryan exists in real life :( So many people are suffering from sadness.

I hope your cousin likes this! You're a brilliant writer.