for A Bowl of Hate, With Regrets on the Side5/8/2013 c1 
22AFractionOfMySoul
This is very, very deep; and technically sound.
I liked the story line it followed, and how you incorporated the dream. Too often we're blinded by perceived- or real- injustices, to forgive the person and move on with our lives, with the hate far behind. I really liked this!
22AFractionOfMySoulThis is very, very deep; and technically sound.
I liked the story line it followed, and how you incorporated the dream. Too often we're blinded by perceived- or real- injustices, to forgive the person and move on with our lives, with the hate far behind. I really liked this!