for Trixian Heart12/2/2013 c1 just a reader
This story is super interesting! You definitely need to finish it! :)
This story is super interesting! You definitely need to finish it! :)
5/10/2013 c2 Kilian Grey
Very interesting and entertaining story, I especially like the premise that Jess is cross-dressing and doing a good job of it. The alien aspect of your story is intriguing and I can't wait to read more.
You need an editor or beta because you need help with spelling and punctuation. In several places it is quite disconcerting, such as caterer, not cattier, is the spelling for someone who provides food. Cuteness is one word and etc.
Very interesting and entertaining story, I especially like the premise that Jess is cross-dressing and doing a good job of it. The alien aspect of your story is intriguing and I can't wait to read more.
You need an editor or beta because you need help with spelling and punctuation. In several places it is quite disconcerting, such as caterer, not cattier, is the spelling for someone who provides food. Cuteness is one word and etc.