for In your eyes8/14/2017 c1 
28CMfan5000
Nice job! I like the rhyme scheme and the transition from the love perceived to the love received.
Thank you for sharing.
28CMfan5000Nice job! I like the rhyme scheme and the transition from the love perceived to the love received.
Thank you for sharing.
10/15/2015 c1 Silver Star
This is cute. I like the way it flows without sounding choppy. Great rhyming, and I just love this poem.
S.S.
This is cute. I like the way it flows without sounding choppy. Great rhyming, and I just love this poem.
S.S.