
9/12/2014 c2 KKincer
I have read this short a dozen or more times hoping, wishing and even praying for more. Please reconsider adding more. If you are set on it being done just as is then so be it. I appreciate the good work regardless.
I have read this short a dozen or more times hoping, wishing and even praying for more. Please reconsider adding more. If you are set on it being done just as is then so be it. I appreciate the good work regardless.
1/9/2014 c2 notion potion
U should add more to the story. like what happens next?
U should add more to the story. like what happens next?
7/12/2013 c1
6TheChosenDhova
So very exciting! You're a really good writter :) I enjoyed this two shot a lot hun! And maybe you can update further, ne? ;) thanks for the story, it was cute :) -yes, I am a little messed up

So very exciting! You're a really good writter :) I enjoyed this two shot a lot hun! And maybe you can update further, ne? ;) thanks for the story, it was cute :) -yes, I am a little messed up
5/29/2013 c2 Aku no musume
Some of the hottest smut I've read! ;) I hope you decide to continue this! It didn't feel like an ending to me. :( I want to see more of Lewis becoming Kale's pet/slave and getting broken (but it's hot when he resists! ;D). Now I'm just imagining Kale forcing him to walk for miles after all that as they look for civilization! -nosebleed- You're an awesome writer, so I hope you write more! )
Some of the hottest smut I've read! ;) I hope you decide to continue this! It didn't feel like an ending to me. :( I want to see more of Lewis becoming Kale's pet/slave and getting broken (but it's hot when he resists! ;D). Now I'm just imagining Kale forcing him to walk for miles after all that as they look for civilization! -nosebleed- You're an awesome writer, so I hope you write more! )
5/29/2013 c2 InsanityAndBeyond
id love for you to continue this. im already invested in the characters, i think itd make for a great full length story, angst and dealing with circumstances with eventual happy ending between the two characters etc.
id love for you to continue this. im already invested in the characters, i think itd make for a great full length story, angst and dealing with circumstances with eventual happy ending between the two characters etc.
5/23/2013 c1 Guest
i am waiting for the end
i am waiting for the end
5/19/2013 c1 Guest
hmmm
hmmm
5/15/2013 c1 Aku no musume
Pretty good so far! Lookig forward to the next chapter! :D
Pretty good so far! Lookig forward to the next chapter! :D
5/13/2013 c1 Guest
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