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5/15/2013 c3 graywolf63
Poor Chance,,,such an unfeeling family.

Fin REALLY needs to update his sleepwear! Seriously.
Oh My..the Mystery Man. Hmmmmm
Can't wait for more!
5/15/2013 c2 graywolf63
Seriously?! Batman Underwear?! LOL

I feel so bad for both of them.
Such a horrid misunderstanding.
5/14/2013 c2 raytondaite
Oh no, poor Fin! Oh my, the SMUT! Lol!
Also, you pulled off the perspective changes spectacularly. The shift between Fin and Chance were very smooth. Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next one!
Oh! One last thing before I go: The whole yellow boutonniere thing seems like such a coincidence, I almost feels as if it WAS somehow planned - not by Chance, obviously, but perhaps someone who knew what he would have on him? But then again, Fin called an actual escort line, so maybe it really is just a case of mistaken identity and being at the right place at the right time?
Blah, now I'm really thinking xP!
5/14/2013 c1 graywolf63
Oh my, Fin is sure in for a surprise at the end of this encounter.
More Please!
5/13/2013 c1 7blackkitties
oh this is just to funny. Poor Fin doesn't even realize it's the wrong guy. This is awesome. I kept laughing in disbelief when I figured it out.
5/13/2013 c1 raytondaite
Very interesting premise! Can't wait to see the next chapter :D
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