for All In9/9/2013 c21 anonymous
this must be one of the best sex scenes ive ever read on fp. very hot!
this must be one of the best sex scenes ive ever read on fp. very hot!
9/9/2013 c21 Guest
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9/8/2013 c20 Guest
fun
fun
9/8/2013 c20 krlsen
:)
:)
9/9/2013 c21 Fart Face
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in while. Not because I'm not enjoying this. It's cute that Fin wants to 'fit in' for Chance. And I'm glad Chance has the good sense to not want him to change. I have to admit that I don't know exactly what the up, down reference is, I'm guessing it's a game controller. But I do know that you're never too old for Buffy. just discovered it's on reruns again. Yay! And I'm much older than Chance.
Sorry, I haven't reviewed in while. Not because I'm not enjoying this. It's cute that Fin wants to 'fit in' for Chance. And I'm glad Chance has the good sense to not want him to change. I have to admit that I don't know exactly what the up, down reference is, I'm guessing it's a game controller. But I do know that you're never too old for Buffy. just discovered it's on reruns again. Yay! And I'm much older than Chance.
9/9/2013 c21 lostlamb
I looked it up but im hoping you'l tell us and that it doesn't refer to what some 'helpful' articles have told me. the more informational sites made more sense to me. Any way, looooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve this chapter. it's amazingly awesome how comfortable Fin is with Chance and how Chance is discovering more of himself. Self discovery rocks. Plus putting Fin in control...you have like no idea how incredibly hot that is, or maybe you do and you want to fry your readers poor minds. well continue on! Till me next, adieu!
I looked it up but im hoping you'l tell us and that it doesn't refer to what some 'helpful' articles have told me. the more informational sites made more sense to me. Any way, looooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve this chapter. it's amazingly awesome how comfortable Fin is with Chance and how Chance is discovering more of himself. Self discovery rocks. Plus putting Fin in control...you have like no idea how incredibly hot that is, or maybe you do and you want to fry your readers poor minds. well continue on! Till me next, adieu!
9/9/2013 c21 Jester79
I'm glad that Chance is proving to Fin how much he really cares about his true person, while there's absolutely nothing wrong with trying to fit in with your partner at any given time as long as you can be accepted for who you are - it can only be a good thing.
I'm glad that Chance is proving to Fin how much he really cares about his true person, while there's absolutely nothing wrong with trying to fit in with your partner at any given time as long as you can be accepted for who you are - it can only be a good thing.
9/9/2013 c21 graywolf63
Definitely no contacts for Fin. I love "nerd" glasses. New a few guys in school who wore them. YUM!
Would love to see Chance come up with his own "weird" wardrobe pieces. Ya know...funny boxers or goofy t-shirts. Maybe off color lawyer remarks...to surprise Fin? I mean...Fin's always catching Chance off guard...would be a nice turn of the table...wouldn't you say?
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Definitely no contacts for Fin. I love "nerd" glasses. New a few guys in school who wore them. YUM!
Would love to see Chance come up with his own "weird" wardrobe pieces. Ya know...funny boxers or goofy t-shirts. Maybe off color lawyer remarks...to surprise Fin? I mean...Fin's always catching Chance off guard...would be a nice turn of the table...wouldn't you say?
;)
9/8/2013 c21 
8DawnSister
I know the references. I am that geek. Great chapter by the way. I love Fin's t shirts too, and would wear them, and do. I have a Back To The Future one that my son wears now: "Roads? Where we're going we don't need roads." I bet Fin has that one too.
Looking forward to the next chapter,
DS
8DawnSisterI know the references. I am that geek. Great chapter by the way. I love Fin's t shirts too, and would wear them, and do. I have a Back To The Future one that my son wears now: "Roads? Where we're going we don't need roads." I bet Fin has that one too.
Looking forward to the next chapter,
DS
9/8/2013 c21 S.H. Marr
I like how this cleared up Fin's ideas about changing.
Also...I'm normally not interested in gratuitous sex...though that's probably because of...personal reasons, but I think this was good, because it seemed necessary for the character development, and even a little bit of plot. So there you have that.
I really, really want to see fin hang out with his friends.
I like how this cleared up Fin's ideas about changing.
Also...I'm normally not interested in gratuitous sex...though that's probably because of...personal reasons, but I think this was good, because it seemed necessary for the character development, and even a little bit of plot. So there you have that.
I really, really want to see fin hang out with his friends.
9/8/2013 c20 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
I like what you've done here, with Fin going all out to understand the lifestyle Chance has lead, and then realising it's a two way thing and Chance wants to do the same. Good stuff.
Suki
I like what you've done here, with Fin going all out to understand the lifestyle Chance has lead, and then realising it's a two way thing and Chance wants to do the same. Good stuff.
Suki
9/4/2013 c20 reader
Isn't he a bit old for Buffy? Chance certainly is. I mean, that's for teens, right?
Isn't he a bit old for Buffy? Chance certainly is. I mean, that's for teens, right?
9/5/2013 c20 lostlamb
OMG! My Fin! What has he done to his adorkably sexy self! I don't want a more 'professional' Fin. A nerdy Chance now that's hot. Why Fin why? Now that comforty snugggly scene love it sooooooo much.
OMG! My Fin! What has he done to his adorkably sexy self! I don't want a more 'professional' Fin. A nerdy Chance now that's hot. Why Fin why? Now that comforty snugggly scene love it sooooooo much.