
1/23/2014 c1 Guest
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1/20/2014 c6 Guest
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1/13/2014 c6 bamf4720
Please continue.
Please continue.
1/10/2014 c6 Kimi456
Please keep writing.
Please keep writing.
1/10/2014 c6 WVU
I really like this story. Please continue writing.
I really like this story. Please continue writing.
6/2/2013 c3
7One day you'll be just like us
It's a little "cookie-cutter" as far as the sex-change trope goes, like you mentioned - one complaint in particular is that I always thought it unlikely that a guy would find himself subconsciously attracted to a girl disguised as a boy - but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and hopefully things get more interesting from here! Other than that, I find the story very well done in terms of writing style and grammar and such.

It's a little "cookie-cutter" as far as the sex-change trope goes, like you mentioned - one complaint in particular is that I always thought it unlikely that a guy would find himself subconsciously attracted to a girl disguised as a boy - but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and hopefully things get more interesting from here! Other than that, I find the story very well done in terms of writing style and grammar and such.
6/1/2013 c3
2Potestas1335
I've read the manga hana-Kimi. It's a really funny manga and I like the way you're using it here. Please continue. :)

I've read the manga hana-Kimi. It's a really funny manga and I like the way you're using it here. Please continue. :)
5/25/2013 c2 Guest
Whaaaaaaat?!
Whaaaaaaat?!
5/19/2013 c1 Guest
More please!
More please!