
9/1/2014 c1
1RainWoman21
I have NEVER said a bad thing about any of your stories, and I'm not going to start now. That was so exciting to read. I absolutely loved it.

I have NEVER said a bad thing about any of your stories, and I'm not going to start now. That was so exciting to read. I absolutely loved it.
8/30/2014 c1 Sunne Adverson
Sad.
Pretty sad.
I can't review worth a crap.
But I'll try.
Ok, I absolutely loved it. Although, I thought that the way you wrote in this story was a little less vivid than something like "Millie"
Still a fantastic read though. I really need to catch up and read all your stuff.
I thought this story was very dark. You really have a thing for that don't you?
I have one question though. How do you misspell Blue? :P
Sad.
Pretty sad.
I can't review worth a crap.
But I'll try.
Ok, I absolutely loved it. Although, I thought that the way you wrote in this story was a little less vivid than something like "Millie"
Still a fantastic read though. I really need to catch up and read all your stuff.
I thought this story was very dark. You really have a thing for that don't you?
I have one question though. How do you misspell Blue? :P
1/16/2014 c1
11iNdie OT
This story I admire most out of all the ones I have read. The writing style is perfect for the whole tone and mood of the written work. Static appeals to me so much because of the "real world" situation you placed these characters in. They worked together gruesomely, but perfectly. It was beautiful in the way that the characters pushed and pulled with one another. The whole work, though short, came together in a very well-written, nicely-paced, and gripping story. It left me strangely satisfied but still wanting more.
-Stripes

This story I admire most out of all the ones I have read. The writing style is perfect for the whole tone and mood of the written work. Static appeals to me so much because of the "real world" situation you placed these characters in. They worked together gruesomely, but perfectly. It was beautiful in the way that the characters pushed and pulled with one another. The whole work, though short, came together in a very well-written, nicely-paced, and gripping story. It left me strangely satisfied but still wanting more.
-Stripes
5/23/2013 c1 Absent Pulse
...I blushed.
"I feel more like a hungry entity, aimlessly wandering for an impossible rectitude." - Epic line, by the way.
Now, onto the review itself.
You've got this poetic magic. You work your spells on your readers and make them bend, break, mend and expand to suit your will. You don't care about bulldung like 'taboos'. There's no limit. You write from the heart and plunge the knife into it. Horror and beauty combine. Delicioussss. Hng.
Well done, sweets. My review isn't nearly good enough to describe the thrill I just got. I repeat; very well done. Let me step back, nod and applaud.
Humbly favourited. I just love the tragic romance. And you're a very romantic soul, aren't you? I like your soul. Not in a creepy, succubus way. Well, maybe just a little bit.
(Again, I blushed.)
...I blushed.
"I feel more like a hungry entity, aimlessly wandering for an impossible rectitude." - Epic line, by the way.
Now, onto the review itself.
You've got this poetic magic. You work your spells on your readers and make them bend, break, mend and expand to suit your will. You don't care about bulldung like 'taboos'. There's no limit. You write from the heart and plunge the knife into it. Horror and beauty combine. Delicioussss. Hng.
Well done, sweets. My review isn't nearly good enough to describe the thrill I just got. I repeat; very well done. Let me step back, nod and applaud.
Humbly favourited. I just love the tragic romance. And you're a very romantic soul, aren't you? I like your soul. Not in a creepy, succubus way. Well, maybe just a little bit.
(Again, I blushed.)
5/22/2013 c1
2ninjawolf197
I love it. I have no bad thoughts about this! You definitely need to write more! And for your first homosexual relationship in a story, you did really good, considering you have no experience with that kind of thing. Nicely written.

I love it. I have no bad thoughts about this! You definitely need to write more! And for your first homosexual relationship in a story, you did really good, considering you have no experience with that kind of thing. Nicely written.