for It Was Only a Kiss7/20/2022 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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1/7/2017 c8 
13creativesmarts
Lol, he probably just walked in on him naked...at least, I hope so...next chapter should be interesting ;)
I'm intrigued to find out what's going on with Evan; who's this "He" who was mentioned at the counseling session? Why isn't he living at home anymore? So many questions, I can't wait to find out more :)
13creativesmartsLol, he probably just walked in on him naked...at least, I hope so...next chapter should be interesting ;)
I'm intrigued to find out what's going on with Evan; who's this "He" who was mentioned at the counseling session? Why isn't he living at home anymore? So many questions, I can't wait to find out more :)
1/4/2017 c8 2Neo Rulez
Hmm it was interesting. Few capitalization problems that need to be fixed but that's so easy to fix. The story ultimately flowed well. I can't wait to see what you have in store.
2Neo RulezHmm it was interesting. Few capitalization problems that need to be fixed but that's so easy to fix. The story ultimately flowed well. I can't wait to see what you have in store.
3/23/2016 c7 13creativesmarts
Lol, I didn't realize he stole the guy's car xD That's wonderful. And it was interesting seeing Val's point of view.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
13creativesmartsLol, I didn't realize he stole the guy's car xD That's wonderful. And it was interesting seeing Val's point of view.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
11/26/2015 c6 RenEtAl
The impregnate the teacher line was funny :D Ali is fun. And gossipy like a teenage girl.
The impregnate the teacher line was funny :D Ali is fun. And gossipy like a teenage girl.
11/26/2015 c5 RenEtAl
Gyahah! So cute. I'm blushing.
I eat ice cream the same way as Jo, lick it ice cream side down so the spoon doesn't hit my tongue, then lick the rest into my mouth.
I like Evan. I like cold characters like him. Then when they warm up, it's cute.
Gyahah! So cute. I'm blushing.
I eat ice cream the same way as Jo, lick it ice cream side down so the spoon doesn't hit my tongue, then lick the rest into my mouth.
I like Evan. I like cold characters like him. Then when they warm up, it's cute.
11/26/2015 c4 RenEtAl
It was funny how Jo was actually at the club. Maybe I'm slow, but I didn't see that coming. Ahem. I liked this chapter.
It was funny how Jo was actually at the club. Maybe I'm slow, but I didn't see that coming. Ahem. I liked this chapter.
11/26/2015 c3 RenEtAl
Making out with her and then dumping her? Cold, man, cold. She ruined it with her "I love you." Silly girl.
Making out with her and then dumping her? Cold, man, cold. She ruined it with her "I love you." Silly girl.
11/26/2015 c2 RenEtAl
I'm confused about the timeline because you say "last night" but then a few paragraphs later say "two days ago."
I'm confused about the timeline because you say "last night" but then a few paragraphs later say "two days ago."
11/23/2015 c6 Clarissa Rose
Awww! I love this story so far! Jo is such a cutie, even if he is a little strange (in fact, that probably makes him cuter). Interested to know what's going with him and Declan as well! I really like Ali... of course I tend to love most characters who live off of sarcasm. What is it that Ali has not said about Evan for 12 years? Ah, it's all so interesting!
Update soon, Darling!
With Love,
Clary Rose
Awww! I love this story so far! Jo is such a cutie, even if he is a little strange (in fact, that probably makes him cuter). Interested to know what's going with him and Declan as well! I really like Ali... of course I tend to love most characters who live off of sarcasm. What is it that Ali has not said about Evan for 12 years? Ah, it's all so interesting!
Update soon, Darling!
With Love,
Clary Rose
11/9/2015 c3 12Fansick-Originals
I'm torn between hating Jo and sympathizing with him.
I do like seeing the indecision with Evan. It's very realistic that one just coming to terms with sexuality would have an inner battle much like this one.
12Fansick-OriginalsI'm torn between hating Jo and sympathizing with him.
I do like seeing the indecision with Evan. It's very realistic that one just coming to terms with sexuality would have an inner battle much like this one.
11/9/2015 c1 Fansick-Originals
Sorry it took me a while to get to this. Thank you for the review and the url for this story.
It had an off start for me but that's just because I'm not a party-goer so the whole scene makes me feel a little claustrophobic lol
That being said I loved the character descriptions and the inner turmoil of your main OC :)
Sorry it took me a while to get to this. Thank you for the review and the url for this story.
It had an off start for me but that's just because I'm not a party-goer so the whole scene makes me feel a little claustrophobic lol
That being said I loved the character descriptions and the inner turmoil of your main OC :)