for The Garrity Girls and the Bowman Boys6/15/2013 c1 
2npatel621
Wow, this is a wonderful oneshot. There is so much detail in the story and in the relationships between everyone! Great job!
2npatel621Wow, this is a wonderful oneshot. There is so much detail in the story and in the relationships between everyone! Great job!
6/13/2013 c1 1Trinity6
Oh my god! this story was absolutely amazing! a pure delight! I never wanted it to end :'(
why dont you continue writing small one-shots for the The Garrity Girls and The Bowman boys? I would love to read more about them!
Oh my god! this story was absolutely amazing! a pure delight! I never wanted it to end :'(
why dont you continue writing small one-shots for the The Garrity Girls and The Bowman boys? I would love to read more about them!
6/13/2013 c1 8JamieBell
What a fun, great story! Did you ever read the Boys Start the War children's series by Phyllis Reynolds Naylor? It's a great read, no matter how old you get. :-) This sort of reminded me of what that series might look like once all the kids got to high school. Haha, lots of humor and tenderness. Loved it!
8JamieBellWhat a fun, great story! Did you ever read the Boys Start the War children's series by Phyllis Reynolds Naylor? It's a great read, no matter how old you get. :-) This sort of reminded me of what that series might look like once all the kids got to high school. Haha, lots of humor and tenderness. Loved it!
6/8/2013 c1 1Lillith Lies in the Dark
I fucking love this story, hell just that sentence doesn't explain how fan-tucking-fastic this is. Hats off to you, because you have officially blown my mind. I am seriously a fan of yours now. I mean sure I kind of knew they were gonna end up together, but you still had me on the edge of my chair wondering what was going to happen next, and I love how Nora wasn't one of those typical story girls that just keeps getting depressed wondering about whether the guy really loves them. Not that I have a problem with those kind of stories, but I've been reading those a lot lately, so this was like a breath of fresh air. Honestly at the very end I was trying to guess how it'd end; I was really banking on Maggie walking in and maybe walking back out, and then Nora saying, "Wait Maggie, I can explain. It was the abs...the abs!" But really, I enjoyed it up to the very end. So please keep writing these beautiful(chaotic) stories, they really warm my heart and make me laugh. Sorry I don't mean to be a constant but I realized I wasn't logged in RIGHT AFTER I posted this review.
1Lillith Lies in the DarkI fucking love this story, hell just that sentence doesn't explain how fan-tucking-fastic this is. Hats off to you, because you have officially blown my mind. I am seriously a fan of yours now. I mean sure I kind of knew they were gonna end up together, but you still had me on the edge of my chair wondering what was going to happen next, and I love how Nora wasn't one of those typical story girls that just keeps getting depressed wondering about whether the guy really loves them. Not that I have a problem with those kind of stories, but I've been reading those a lot lately, so this was like a breath of fresh air. Honestly at the very end I was trying to guess how it'd end; I was really banking on Maggie walking in and maybe walking back out, and then Nora saying, "Wait Maggie, I can explain. It was the abs...the abs!" But really, I enjoyed it up to the very end. So please keep writing these beautiful(chaotic) stories, they really warm my heart and make me laugh. Sorry I don't mean to be a constant but I realized I wasn't logged in RIGHT AFTER I posted this review.
6/8/2013 c1 Guest
I fucking love this story, hell just that sentence doesn't explain how fan-tucking-fastic this is. Hats off to you, because you have officially blown my mind. I am seriously a fan of yours now. I mean sure I kind of knew they were gonna end up together, but you still had me on the edge of my chair wondering what was going to happen next, and I love how Nora wasn't one of those typical story girls that just keeps getting depressed wondering about whether the guy really loves them. Not that I have a problem with those kind of stories, but I've been reading those a lot lately, so this was like a breath of fresh air. Honestly at the very end I was trying to guess how it'd end; I was really banking on Maggie walking in and maybe walking back out, and then Nora saying, "Wait Maggie, I can explain. It was the abs...the abs!" But really, I enjoyed it up to the very end. So please keep writing these beautiful(chaotic) stories, they really warm my heart and make me laugh.
I fucking love this story, hell just that sentence doesn't explain how fan-tucking-fastic this is. Hats off to you, because you have officially blown my mind. I am seriously a fan of yours now. I mean sure I kind of knew they were gonna end up together, but you still had me on the edge of my chair wondering what was going to happen next, and I love how Nora wasn't one of those typical story girls that just keeps getting depressed wondering about whether the guy really loves them. Not that I have a problem with those kind of stories, but I've been reading those a lot lately, so this was like a breath of fresh air. Honestly at the very end I was trying to guess how it'd end; I was really banking on Maggie walking in and maybe walking back out, and then Nora saying, "Wait Maggie, I can explain. It was the abs...the abs!" But really, I enjoyed it up to the very end. So please keep writing these beautiful(chaotic) stories, they really warm my heart and make me laugh.
6/6/2013 c1 Jess
Super cute one shot. It's been a really long time since I've laughed out loud while reading a story. :) great job! I wish this was a full length, it would have been really good!
Super cute one shot. It's been a really long time since I've laughed out loud while reading a story. :) great job! I wish this was a full length, it would have been really good!
6/6/2013 c1 1funnechick
This was great, and I truly loved it! If I had to make one critique, it would be that I would have enjoyed it a tad bit more if there was less cussing. But like I said, it was a great read and terrific one-shot (no matter how long it was, haha).
1funnechickThis was great, and I truly loved it! If I had to make one critique, it would be that I would have enjoyed it a tad bit more if there was less cussing. But like I said, it was a great read and terrific one-shot (no matter how long it was, haha).
6/6/2013 c1 1Queen Kazza
Can you pllllleeeeeassse do an epilogue? *puppy eyes* Of when Colin and Nora is married and living life or something? pleeeeeaaase? *insert immature whine here* It will take care of my closure problems for sure.
:3
1Queen KazzaCan you pllllleeeeeassse do an epilogue? *puppy eyes* Of when Colin and Nora is married and living life or something? pleeeeeaaase? *insert immature whine here* It will take care of my closure problems for sure.
:3
6/6/2013 c1 MusicLover21
Oh, my god. I loved the story. It was completely hilarious. I seriously was laughing out loud when Nora was talking to the reader about how you should never trust a Garrity girl. Gah, this was amazing. I vicariously lived through the story. I so want to be Nora when she's kissing Colin, getting to feel his abs and arms. Wow, that sounds reallyy weird. Anyway, it was amazing. The grammar was almost spot on, and that is really good compared to some of the stories I've read.
Oh, my god. I loved the story. It was completely hilarious. I seriously was laughing out loud when Nora was talking to the reader about how you should never trust a Garrity girl. Gah, this was amazing. I vicariously lived through the story. I so want to be Nora when she's kissing Colin, getting to feel his abs and arms. Wow, that sounds reallyy weird. Anyway, it was amazing. The grammar was almost spot on, and that is really good compared to some of the stories I've read.
6/5/2013 c1 Hedgehog Named Fish
That was the fucking longest one shot i have ever read, but in a good way!
Its so tragic what happened to Coco Puff..
-Peace out
That was the fucking longest one shot i have ever read, but in a good way!
Its so tragic what happened to Coco Puff..
-Peace out
6/1/2013 c1 Katie
So that was awesome. It was so worth it! It was hilarious, perfect, and not rushed. Great job :)
So that was awesome. It was so worth it! It was hilarious, perfect, and not rushed. Great job :)
6/1/2013 c1 1leavesfallingup
Hamsters always get the worst end of the deal. Poor Cocoa Puff... may her wheel always spin.
Cute story. The parents are either completely oblivious or don't care that two fifteen year olds are very intimate. Or did they decide that it was better than having their children trying to kill each other?
1leavesfallingupHamsters always get the worst end of the deal. Poor Cocoa Puff... may her wheel always spin.
Cute story. The parents are either completely oblivious or don't care that two fifteen year olds are very intimate. Or did they decide that it was better than having their children trying to kill each other?
6/1/2013 c1 solangedrake
I absolutely loved it! Not only funny and witty but hot as well, i loved that it was all in one go and your amazing at writting!
I absolutely loved it! Not only funny and witty but hot as well, i loved that it was all in one go and your amazing at writting!