
6/1/2013 c1 andsomecallitlove
I normally don't review, but this is one of the best reads I've read on FictionPress, thus far. You are truly talented and I totally fell in love with all of the characters in the story. I was sorely disappointed to see that there wasn't more completed works to read of yours to read. Keep writing and I can't wait to see what else you'd come up with. :)
I normally don't review, but this is one of the best reads I've read on FictionPress, thus far. You are truly talented and I totally fell in love with all of the characters in the story. I was sorely disappointed to see that there wasn't more completed works to read of yours to read. Keep writing and I can't wait to see what else you'd come up with. :)
6/1/2013 c1 Tough judger
Omg that was terrific I loved it! And I'm very hard to please in books!
Omg that was terrific I loved it! And I'm very hard to please in books!
5/31/2013 c1
69Shadowswept
I loved every minute of reading this! It's absolutely one of the best stories I've read on this site. It's funny, sweet, and very, very sexy. The characters are memorable. The pranks and the shock of two enemies going on a date are a riot. I laughed my head off when they were all spying at the movie. Then, hot damn did the story get incredibly sexy!
Honestly, I think this story is perfect. You should definitely look into getting it published, because it's a gem.

I loved every minute of reading this! It's absolutely one of the best stories I've read on this site. It's funny, sweet, and very, very sexy. The characters are memorable. The pranks and the shock of two enemies going on a date are a riot. I laughed my head off when they were all spying at the movie. Then, hot damn did the story get incredibly sexy!
Honestly, I think this story is perfect. You should definitely look into getting it published, because it's a gem.
5/31/2013 c1 sleepyloner
Man, its' a bummer that it's only one-shot but damn this was a good read. Brilliant. I feel like I'm reading/imagining this all time classic American families movies. :D Keep it up! You're good!
Man, its' a bummer that it's only one-shot but damn this was a good read. Brilliant. I feel like I'm reading/imagining this all time classic American families movies. :D Keep it up! You're good!
5/31/2013 c1 je ne veux pas travailler
I really enjoyed reading this! It didn't seem unnecessarily long, the characters were believable, and I loved he chemistry between Nora and Colin.
I really enjoyed reading this! It didn't seem unnecessarily long, the characters were believable, and I loved he chemistry between Nora and Colin.