for Dark Side of Dusk12/30/2013 c2 Bryanna B
You are a very good writer! I like the buildup between the two characters. Off to read more!
You are a very good writer! I like the buildup between the two characters. Off to read more!
12/28/2013 c2 
1unravelling
Thank you, dear. I sending some Aspirin might dull the pain in my stomach for a while, but I've heard it's for headache. /fail excuse of a joke
The first two chapters were kinda sappy, to tell the truth, but you've done a pretty good job of getting me hooked on your main characters' past, which is a hard thing to do. I commend you on it. :D
I'm interested to see the next chapter
-Azure
1unravellingThank you, dear. I sending some Aspirin might dull the pain in my stomach for a while, but I've heard it's for headache. /fail excuse of a joke
The first two chapters were kinda sappy, to tell the truth, but you've done a pretty good job of getting me hooked on your main characters' past, which is a hard thing to do. I commend you on it. :D
I'm interested to see the next chapter
-Azure
6/3/2013 c1 Guest
Awesome story. Update soon.
Awesome story. Update soon.