for Serendipity6/9/2013 c1 
7Distance Navigator
I love your imagery, it correlates to the theme so well. If there's one thing I would add it would be rhymes, and probably make it a bit longer. I like to read interesting poems like yours forever like their a magical yellow road(yes I love poetry). I became a fan of your writing from this poem, keep going.
7Distance NavigatorI love your imagery, it correlates to the theme so well. If there's one thing I would add it would be rhymes, and probably make it a bit longer. I like to read interesting poems like yours forever like their a magical yellow road(yes I love poetry). I became a fan of your writing from this poem, keep going.