for The Iron Bonds of Love3/27/2015 c1 Guest
I'm not sure why you decided to abandon this story. Vikings are definately a very big thing...isn't every kind of thug/alpha when you don't actually have to put up with one? Anyway, if you ever get back to writing it, i'll read it.
Truthfully, slave stories make my stomach turn. I read then in perpetual hope that at some point the slave gets to chop the masters' nuts off. :)
I'm not sure why you decided to abandon this story. Vikings are definately a very big thing...isn't every kind of thug/alpha when you don't actually have to put up with one? Anyway, if you ever get back to writing it, i'll read it.
Truthfully, slave stories make my stomach turn. I read then in perpetual hope that at some point the slave gets to chop the masters' nuts off. :)
6/10/2013 c1 
9boona
Salutations, you did a great job with your imagery of both the setting so far, and the characters. it felt like I could easily see and feel a sort of passion for the main character. Although I see a lot of hardship for the main character up ahead, or this could be my imagination. this is because it feels like the foreshadowing is leading that way. Anyways good job so far looking forward to more
9boonaSalutations, you did a great job with your imagery of both the setting so far, and the characters. it felt like I could easily see and feel a sort of passion for the main character. Although I see a lot of hardship for the main character up ahead, or this could be my imagination. this is because it feels like the foreshadowing is leading that way. Anyways good job so far looking forward to more