for Rebuild8/11/2013 c9 
3TriSX
OH FUDGE... just as when I want to read more, currently following this right now! You have a good story sir... keep on continuing and join forums, maybe you can get reviewers for that.
You may look up on my stories to get new ideas.
3TriSXOH FUDGE... just as when I want to read more, currently following this right now! You have a good story sir... keep on continuing and join forums, maybe you can get reviewers for that.
You may look up on my stories to get new ideas.
8/11/2013 c8 TriSX
Oh, I finally get it, you use syllables for words and put them too-ge-ther so either you may confuse the readers or it's pointless for them to read. No mistakes at all, good job!
Oh, I finally get it, you use syllables for words and put them too-ge-ther so either you may confuse the readers or it's pointless for them to read. No mistakes at all, good job!
8/11/2013 c7 TriSX
Um.. Forgetting your A/N but I'll try to give you support but if you want ideas, you may ask me for some.
So... animals, What I see here is animals can turn to zombies and a zoo. Sure, animals, but turning to zombies? That is not good, what next, Call of Duty: Zombies reference?
Um.. Forgetting your A/N but I'll try to give you support but if you want ideas, you may ask me for some.
So... animals, What I see here is animals can turn to zombies and a zoo. Sure, animals, but turning to zombies? That is not good, what next, Call of Duty: Zombies reference?
8/11/2013 c6 TriSX
Um... Healer... seriously? What you meant is a doctor or is it medic/paramedic. Healer doesn't seem to fit, It feels like you used a medieval term in a modern time.
Who is this guy at the EYE part?
Anyways you did a great job here.
Um... Healer... seriously? What you meant is a doctor or is it medic/paramedic. Healer doesn't seem to fit, It feels like you used a medieval term in a modern time.
Who is this guy at the EYE part?
Anyways you did a great job here.
8/11/2013 c5 TriSX
So the zombies are getting smarter! Oh, this chapters is... I don't know.
"He clutched his ribs then fell." Do you mean chest, it pretty impossible to hold your bones. Pleas clarify me if I'm wrong.
So the zombies are getting smarter! Oh, this chapters is... I don't know.
"He clutched his ribs then fell." Do you mean chest, it pretty impossible to hold your bones. Pleas clarify me if I'm wrong.
8/11/2013 c4 TriSX
Rule on dealing humans turning into zombies: Shoot their head if they are already useless. Why would someone leave their teammate behind, that is plain stupidity. Will you put the military here too?
Rule on dealing humans turning into zombies: Shoot their head if they are already useless. Why would someone leave their teammate behind, that is plain stupidity. Will you put the military here too?
8/11/2013 c3 TriSX
Bloody fight, especially the usage of melee weapons... can't wait to see assault rifles shredding zombies. Who is Ruth and Amos? Tell me why do you block the locations?
Bloody fight, especially the usage of melee weapons... can't wait to see assault rifles shredding zombies. Who is Ruth and Amos? Tell me why do you block the locations?
8/11/2013 c2 TriSX
Multiple POV for the win! Back to the job, you should start rereading the chapters if they have any mistake, I only spotted two. "The mad had eyeglasses" I think mad should be man.
And
"His suit was of a soldier" Um... I think the appropriate word for this is: "He is wearing a military uniform."
Awesome Plants Vs Zombies reference.
Multiple POV for the win! Back to the job, you should start rereading the chapters if they have any mistake, I only spotted two. "The mad had eyeglasses" I think mad should be man.
And
"His suit was of a soldier" Um... I think the appropriate word for this is: "He is wearing a military uniform."
Awesome Plants Vs Zombies reference.
8/11/2013 c1 TriSX
Good intro. That picture reminds me that game "Rebuild." Have you already played that strategy zombie survival game? Oh yeah, are you even allowed to use that picture? (No one cares where people get them.)
Good intro. That picture reminds me that game "Rebuild." Have you already played that strategy zombie survival game? Oh yeah, are you even allowed to use that picture? (No one cares where people get them.)