for The Yellow Balloon6/24/2013 c1 
3Katsurou Shimizu
Ah yes, finally you uploaded that poem!
Funny how a downer couple of weeks can make me relate to this piece even more.
Loved the simple imagery, especially with how the balloon defined the themes of loneliness and hopes so well.
Keep writing!
3Katsurou ShimizuAh yes, finally you uploaded that poem!
Funny how a downer couple of weeks can make me relate to this piece even more.
Loved the simple imagery, especially with how the balloon defined the themes of loneliness and hopes so well.
Keep writing!
6/15/2013 c1 5Y. S. Wong
As soon as I saw that this was a poem, I thought, "Man, Asaria's style is definitely suited for poetry." And yup, I was right. This was great, and I'm no expert when it comes to poetry, but imagery and mood are really what make poetry for me, and you've got it all here.
5Y. S. WongAs soon as I saw that this was a poem, I thought, "Man, Asaria's style is definitely suited for poetry." And yup, I was right. This was great, and I'm no expert when it comes to poetry, but imagery and mood are really what make poetry for me, and you've got it all here.