for Nine Inch Nails2/24/2015 c2 Deleteplease2day
To be honest, I do not identify with these stories at all, but the idea of a NIN inspired story intrigued me, so here I am. Maybe their marriage wouldn't be the downward spiral if these characters had steamy sex more often:)
To be honest, I do not identify with these stories at all, but the idea of a NIN inspired story intrigued me, so here I am. Maybe their marriage wouldn't be the downward spiral if these characters had steamy sex more often:)
12/19/2014 c2 Guest
I'll be honest with you, Chapter One was hot as hell, but it didn't really fire me up as much as Chapter Two did. I don't know if it's the fact that I'm going through a relationship that reflects this, but it was just amazing.
Keep up the good work!
I'll be honest with you, Chapter One was hot as hell, but it didn't really fire me up as much as Chapter Two did. I don't know if it's the fact that I'm going through a relationship that reflects this, but it was just amazing.
Keep up the good work!
11/18/2014 c1 
9KarmaGetsMeGoing
Oh goddamnit. That was hot! And so close! Your writing just keeps amazing me.
9KarmaGetsMeGoingOh goddamnit. That was hot! And so close! Your writing just keeps amazing me.
6/9/2014 c2 3BlackAngel-Chan
Perfect! As always :) I love the ending-how you explained that sonetimes broken things can be salvagable still. It can work with just one small push.
No other words to say but: Awesome.
3BlackAngel-ChanPerfect! As always :) I love the ending-how you explained that sonetimes broken things can be salvagable still. It can work with just one small push.
No other words to say but: Awesome.
5/10/2014 c2 Jess
Closer by NIN
Closer by NIN
4/27/2014 c2 Forever.In.Love71413
AS a young married woman I can def attest that sometimes all you need is sex to make things better ;-p good chap
AS a young married woman I can def attest that sometimes all you need is sex to make things better ;-p good chap
3/1/2014 c2 Guest
I love your writing. This chapter was so sweet and a pleasure to read. Song request: The Day the World Went Away
I love your writing. This chapter was so sweet and a pleasure to read. Song request: The Day the World Went Away
2/22/2014 c1 4Nomei Bleu
The story is gripping and even though I don't care for the theme, namely the infidelity by the elder brother and the sister, I can appreciate your skillful writing.
4Nomei BleuThe story is gripping and even though I don't care for the theme, namely the infidelity by the elder brother and the sister, I can appreciate your skillful writing.
2/22/2014 c2 Nomei Bleu
Now you've made me wonder what happens to them after the dining room table. Wonderful imagery.
Now you've made me wonder what happens to them after the dining room table. Wonderful imagery.