for Insanity11/2/2013 c13 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Whoa, wait, did they all just die? Anyways, I really liked your story, can't wait for your next one, and I hope the ending is as unexpected as this one was. The only thing I have to criticize is how abrupt the ending was. I feel like there was no climax. Also, some questions were left unexplained. Why does Blackblood want to take over the world? Questions like that. But all in all, great story. :)
Whoa, wait, did they all just die? Anyways, I really liked your story, can't wait for your next one, and I hope the ending is as unexpected as this one was. The only thing I have to criticize is how abrupt the ending was. I feel like there was no climax. Also, some questions were left unexplained. Why does Blackblood want to take over the world? Questions like that. But all in all, great story. :)
11/2/2013 c10 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Whoa, did you write that poem yourself? All those quotes though...I'm amazed at them. Love your use of each. Btw is the Bleach one from the manga/anime?
Whoa, did you write that poem yourself? All those quotes though...I'm amazed at them. Love your use of each. Btw is the Bleach one from the manga/anime?
10/29/2013 c6 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Ah, so much mystery! If you weren't on the other side of the world, I would be wringing your neck and yelling, "Update! UPDATE!" LOL jk jk, but please, update soon?
Ah, so much mystery! If you weren't on the other side of the world, I would be wringing your neck and yelling, "Update! UPDATE!" LOL jk jk, but please, update soon?
10/20/2013 c5 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Leon is receiving personal training from Frost I see. :) I wish him the best.
Leon is receiving personal training from Frost I see. :) I wish him the best.
10/20/2013 c4 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Whoo! XD Glad to see you back. :) How've you been?
Anyways, still as good a story as ever. You've really improved over the summer! XD
Whoo! XD Glad to see you back. :) How've you been?
Anyways, still as good a story as ever. You've really improved over the summer! XD
7/30/2013 c3 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
Hey! XD Missed this story. :) Great chapter as usual. Could be a bit more descriptive, but otherwise, it's fine.
Hey! XD Missed this story. :) Great chapter as usual. Could be a bit more descriptive, but otherwise, it's fine.
6/16/2013 c2 EverlastingBlueSkyXD
A few very very minor mistakes, but that's it. Cool chapter btw. :) Can't wait for more!
PS Yes, chocolate is very important.
A few very very minor mistakes, but that's it. Cool chapter btw. :) Can't wait for more!
PS Yes, chocolate is very important.