for Witch 3 Reloaded11/4/2014 c3 
1General Raindrop
From what I read since chapter one, Ayame's character is a bit plain? Just by opinion, though.
1General RaindropFrom what I read since chapter one, Ayame's character is a bit plain? Just by opinion, though.
10/17/2014 c1 2The Supreme Crab Master
Hmm...I'm intrigued and I want to know more about precisely what is going on. I want to know why Tokyo-a city of 11 million-needs to be protected and I want to see more of how Ayame deals with her new responsibilities.
On the grammar side, remember that periods and commas aren't interchangeable-most of the time. .
2The Supreme Crab MasterHmm...I'm intrigued and I want to know more about precisely what is going on. I want to know why Tokyo-a city of 11 million-needs to be protected and I want to see more of how Ayame deals with her new responsibilities.
On the grammar side, remember that periods and commas aren't interchangeable-most of the time. .
9/8/2013 c4 1Saraarena
Is Moru going to be okay?
This story is really interesting and it's well written! I can't wait to read more! I noticed the chapters are getting longer, awesome!
Keep writing!
Saraarena
1SaraarenaIs Moru going to be okay?
This story is really interesting and it's well written! I can't wait to read more! I noticed the chapters are getting longer, awesome!
Keep writing!
Saraarena
6/18/2013 c2 23DecayedDreams
I really like this and one of the reasons I clicked on your story was because the summary reminded me of harry potter, being abroad at a school to learn magic. I'll be reviewing for both chapters here.
In your first chapter one very minor mistake whenever you have the first " the letter after it should always be capitalized even if you're just continuing on with a sentence.
I can't wait for Ayame to enter the academy
23DecayedDreamsI really like this and one of the reasons I clicked on your story was because the summary reminded me of harry potter, being abroad at a school to learn magic. I'll be reviewing for both chapters here.
In your first chapter one very minor mistake whenever you have the first " the letter after it should always be capitalized even if you're just continuing on with a sentence.
I can't wait for Ayame to enter the academy