for Lost & Found3/25/2015 c3 Sweetnightmares
You..my friend ..are an amazing writer. Why? Because you belong to a very small population where people know how to orchestrate situations that makes the plot more real (eg. Kristen not getting Aurella's even though she is the main character in the story) and also because your characters are crazy and craziness is greatly appreciated when the reader herself is not very normal. So I suggest you keep on giving us more treats.
You..my friend ..are an amazing writer. Why? Because you belong to a very small population where people know how to orchestrate situations that makes the plot more real (eg. Kristen not getting Aurella's even though she is the main character in the story) and also because your characters are crazy and craziness is greatly appreciated when the reader herself is not very normal. So I suggest you keep on giving us more treats.
7/5/2013 c3 
1SheepishlyMe
Are you going to be writing more acting scenes? I would like to see how this develops.
1SheepishlyMeAre you going to be writing more acting scenes? I would like to see how this develops.
7/5/2013 c1 SheepishlyMe
And this is me making up for being a lurker. Don't be discouraged by lack of feedback, it's a great story and it looks like you have gotten over your writer's block!
And this is me making up for being a lurker. Don't be discouraged by lack of feedback, it's a great story and it looks like you have gotten over your writer's block!
7/4/2013 c4 1AdaGLam
This has a really interesting storyline! I'm so anxious to know what'll happen next. Keep up the good work :)
1AdaGLamThis has a really interesting storyline! I'm so anxious to know what'll happen next. Keep up the good work :)
7/4/2013 c4 CrimsonsNight
Im sad to say but i dont recall who marie is...and i loved the ending of this chapter! Definitely made my heart beat faster. when she was checking her messages it was highly amusing to read her snide comments. And the part where she was checking in was a little off...i don't think they would just give her a key without proper identification. All in all i really enjoyed this chapter, i cant wait to read more. On a side note i would strongly suggest making sure the plotline is running smooth and is not choppy. Please dont give up on the story
Im sad to say but i dont recall who marie is...and i loved the ending of this chapter! Definitely made my heart beat faster. when she was checking her messages it was highly amusing to read her snide comments. And the part where she was checking in was a little off...i don't think they would just give her a key without proper identification. All in all i really enjoyed this chapter, i cant wait to read more. On a side note i would strongly suggest making sure the plotline is running smooth and is not choppy. Please dont give up on the story
7/4/2013 c3 CrimsonsNight
Hmm, i loved the acting scene..but the family dinner was confusing and rushed. Why did she have to move out? And the last part was moderately rushes too how much does it cost to house sit? I think alittle more detail would be great for the the story. I think the plot line is still strong, and i really enjoy the little things in your story.
Hmm, i loved the acting scene..but the family dinner was confusing and rushed. Why did she have to move out? And the last part was moderately rushes too how much does it cost to house sit? I think alittle more detail would be great for the the story. I think the plot line is still strong, and i really enjoy the little things in your story.
6/21/2013 c2 CrimsonsNight
I really love how you pay attention to certain details that give readers hints to how the characters are feeling, and how you don't spell everything out for the reader, you let us make our own connections and conclusions. Thank you for updating i cant wait to read more! Oh. And i really like the flash back...it was very cute.
I really love how you pay attention to certain details that give readers hints to how the characters are feeling, and how you don't spell everything out for the reader, you let us make our own connections and conclusions. Thank you for updating i cant wait to read more! Oh. And i really like the flash back...it was very cute.
6/19/2013 c1 CrimsonsNight
Its very interesting. Its alittle confusing at certain parts, but otherwise really good. I cant wait to read more.
Its very interesting. Its alittle confusing at certain parts, but otherwise really good. I cant wait to read more.