for People on the Bus7/7/2013 c1 
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Damn, that was really good. Very detailed. I appreciated that i didn't know which way the story was going with the plot twists you threw in there. An interesting theme with a lot of meaning. Great job!
16John-the-H-is-silentDamn, that was really good. Very detailed. I appreciated that i didn't know which way the story was going with the plot twists you threw in there. An interesting theme with a lot of meaning. Great job!