for A New Nation11/17/2013 c24 
3TriSX
Aw... short chapter full of planning and arguement... oh... keep up the good work!
3TriSXAw... short chapter full of planning and arguement... oh... keep up the good work!
11/2/2013 c23 Drierwor
Dear inkfngrz,
Great chapter. A lot happens in this chapter. Finally burns has made the decisions to start thinking nuclear and has voiced his opinion. We knew it would happen sooner or later... How could it have not? Wren and Joe was a nice piece also. I appreciate adding in the part about how Wren learns how to shoot a rifle. I also like the description you used that Allen tells Akeera with the Phalanx formation the Spartans were known for using. That was thought out very well. All in all I'm very happy in reading this chapter. Of course now Heiji is probably sweating more knowning that Akeera is in command now.
Sincerely,
Drierwor
Dear inkfngrz,
Great chapter. A lot happens in this chapter. Finally burns has made the decisions to start thinking nuclear and has voiced his opinion. We knew it would happen sooner or later... How could it have not? Wren and Joe was a nice piece also. I appreciate adding in the part about how Wren learns how to shoot a rifle. I also like the description you used that Allen tells Akeera with the Phalanx formation the Spartans were known for using. That was thought out very well. All in all I'm very happy in reading this chapter. Of course now Heiji is probably sweating more knowning that Akeera is in command now.
Sincerely,
Drierwor
11/2/2013 c22 Drierwor
Dear inkfngrz,
Wow talk about an intense chapter! All that coming down on Akeera like that so swiftly. Excellent work!.Keep at it on to the next chapter.
Sincerely,
Drierwor
Dear inkfngrz,
Wow talk about an intense chapter! All that coming down on Akeera like that so swiftly. Excellent work!.Keep at it on to the next chapter.
Sincerely,
Drierwor
10/28/2013 c23 3TriSX
Aww... Wren, a scared little girl to a strong girl who knows how to shoot a gun.
So... lets go nuke Korea? But how about the Russians...
And how about the upcomming raid?
As always... keep up the good work!
3TriSXAww... Wren, a scared little girl to a strong girl who knows how to shoot a gun.
So... lets go nuke Korea? But how about the Russians...
And how about the upcomming raid?
As always... keep up the good work!
10/24/2013 c22 2Terra Booma
Great chapter!
DOANSIONFIO WHY WOULD YOU KILL HIM!?
Short rant aside, it sucks that benton died.
2Terra BoomaGreat chapter!
DOANSIONFIO WHY WOULD YOU KILL HIM!?
Short rant aside, it sucks that benton died.
10/24/2013 c22 3TriSX
We salure to you Benton for your extraordinary bravery. Oh... Akeera is gonna murder the koreans. Keep up the good work.
3TriSXWe salure to you Benton for your extraordinary bravery. Oh... Akeera is gonna murder the koreans. Keep up the good work.
10/22/2013 c21 Drierwor
inkfngrz,
What an awesome read so far! So previously you asked whos your favorite character. So for its of course going to be Allen. Because he provides support for Akeera when she needs it the most. Humm, settings you have provided match wonderfully with what has occured so far for everyone. I really appreciate the different POV and also providing us small updates for whats occuring outside of the lives of Akeera, Allen, Wren and the Resistance. Other than that I'm just eager to read the next chapter.
Sincerely,
Drierwor
inkfngrz,
What an awesome read so far! So previously you asked whos your favorite character. So for its of course going to be Allen. Because he provides support for Akeera when she needs it the most. Humm, settings you have provided match wonderfully with what has occured so far for everyone. I really appreciate the different POV and also providing us small updates for whats occuring outside of the lives of Akeera, Allen, Wren and the Resistance. Other than that I'm just eager to read the next chapter.
Sincerely,
Drierwor
10/18/2013 c21 TriSX
Oh my... Akeera leading a raid... how awesome is that! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work by the way!
Oh my... Akeera leading a raid... how awesome is that! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work by the way!
10/17/2013 c21 2Terra Booma
Great chapter as always!
It's a nice break from all the chaos and fighting, looking forward to more!
2Terra BoomaGreat chapter as always!
It's a nice break from all the chaos and fighting, looking forward to more!
10/13/2013 c20 Terra Booma
1. I'm liking Boone, I don't know why...just...he's interesting?
2. The bad guys are...surprisingly likable, I can see the motives behind some of their actions while still wondering...why? (Groove for example, I understand, but still disagree with him) Waiting for Boone to get a villain, as well as Wren. (Not demanding, wondering if)
3. I've read this since...well, I can't remember what chapter in the last book, I'm in it until the end.
1. I'm liking Boone, I don't know why...just...he's interesting?
2. The bad guys are...surprisingly likable, I can see the motives behind some of their actions while still wondering...why? (Groove for example, I understand, but still disagree with him) Waiting for Boone to get a villain, as well as Wren. (Not demanding, wondering if)
3. I've read this since...well, I can't remember what chapter in the last book, I'm in it until the end.
10/8/2013 c19 3TriSX
I... disappointed... that... I did not review... and that I got nothing to say...
JOKES
Now this cliffhanger is killing me, been waiting for a long time...
oh, like as always, Great job.
Suggestion:
Helicopter Support?
Offshore US Naval fleet right near Iran?
Eastern font starts joining the fight right after Korea gets blown?
3TriSXI... disappointed... that... I did not review... and that I got nothing to say...
JOKES
Now this cliffhanger is killing me, been waiting for a long time...
oh, like as always, Great job.
Suggestion:
Helicopter Support?
Offshore US Naval fleet right near Iran?
Eastern font starts joining the fight right after Korea gets blown?