for A New Nation9/7/2013 c17 
3TriSX
Cool... Akeera and Allen is in a group that may cause havoc behind enemy lines and Wren is not in a good situation.
And just what is happrning in the eastern front anyways?
Sugestion: Send a group of asian soldiers into the US to liberate the country (if they are done with their own problem), or maybe another group of people which are tourist that were traped but with some military experience.
3TriSXCool... Akeera and Allen is in a group that may cause havoc behind enemy lines and Wren is not in a good situation.
And just what is happrning in the eastern front anyways?
Sugestion: Send a group of asian soldiers into the US to liberate the country (if they are done with their own problem), or maybe another group of people which are tourist that were traped but with some military experience.
9/7/2013 c17 2Terra Booma
I like this Joe character...
I love the multiple angles thing, with Wren, Allen, Akeera, That UN guy from a while back, and the submarine guy who showed up once.
2Terra BoomaI like this Joe character...
I love the multiple angles thing, with Wren, Allen, Akeera, That UN guy from a while back, and the submarine guy who showed up once.
8/27/2013 c16 32cam1121
Uggh! I had written such a wonderful review but then I realized my new house doesn't have internet set up yet. I'm so saddened. I wrote something along the lines of 'Such a good story so far! I'm enjoying it so much, which is strange because I'm not one to usually like stories about war. I love your reference to Red Dawn, my celebrity crush is Josh Hutcherson, who plays Robert in it.' Ya, I dunno. But seriously, I'm loving this! As for my favourite character, I may be weird but I really like Haeiji, I just want him to kick Grove's butt! I really like his character, but I want you to do more with him! As for least favourite character, I think you are going to be upset but I'm not feeling Wren. I know you probably love her, but I just feel like at the moment she is an unnecessary character. I really hope you do something with her. Don't hate me! Hahaha! Honestly though, can't wait for more!
32cam1121Uggh! I had written such a wonderful review but then I realized my new house doesn't have internet set up yet. I'm so saddened. I wrote something along the lines of 'Such a good story so far! I'm enjoying it so much, which is strange because I'm not one to usually like stories about war. I love your reference to Red Dawn, my celebrity crush is Josh Hutcherson, who plays Robert in it.' Ya, I dunno. But seriously, I'm loving this! As for my favourite character, I may be weird but I really like Haeiji, I just want him to kick Grove's butt! I really like his character, but I want you to do more with him! As for least favourite character, I think you are going to be upset but I'm not feeling Wren. I know you probably love her, but I just feel like at the moment she is an unnecessary character. I really hope you do something with her. Don't hate me! Hahaha! Honestly though, can't wait for more!
8/23/2013 c16 3TriSX
Awesome, oh yeah um its Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) and its not post-tromatical stress, but anyways Wren is just a child, she might get the spelling wrong... right?
As for the feedback.
1: The story is nice, talks about war and how will the US endure that kind of damage. (Though we still have no word from the Eastern Countries and Europe.)
2:Joe Carter, Because he is kind of strong, tactical, plus he has awesome sniping skills.
3:TJ Grove, Hes evil and a traitor to his country. (Even though he has my Nickname.)
3TriSXAwesome, oh yeah um its Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD) and its not post-tromatical stress, but anyways Wren is just a child, she might get the spelling wrong... right?
As for the feedback.
1: The story is nice, talks about war and how will the US endure that kind of damage. (Though we still have no word from the Eastern Countries and Europe.)
2:Joe Carter, Because he is kind of strong, tactical, plus he has awesome sniping skills.
3:TJ Grove, Hes evil and a traitor to his country. (Even though he has my Nickname.)
8/18/2013 c16 10CrystalDemon
1.) this story is as awesome as the first one.
2.) Akeera, she is tough and smart and I like a strong female lead character.
3.) Tj Grove, he gives me chills.
Great update!
10CrystalDemon1.) this story is as awesome as the first one.
2.) Akeera, she is tough and smart and I like a strong female lead character.
3.) Tj Grove, he gives me chills.
Great update!
8/17/2013 c16 2Terra Booma
Great chapter Ink!
1. I like the story, keep it up!
2. I love Wren, but if your planning what I think you are I might be worried.
3. I don't like Grove, there's nothing wrong with him as a villain, I just hate villains.
2Terra BoomaGreat chapter Ink!
1. I like the story, keep it up!
2. I love Wren, but if your planning what I think you are I might be worried.
3. I don't like Grove, there's nothing wrong with him as a villain, I just hate villains.
8/8/2013 c15 3TriSX
So the US is separated in to two by Americans working for the Koreans/Iranians/Russians and the American resistance.
Just wondering, will US's allies send reinforcements to fight off the bad guys? I mean US have lots of allies in the east.
By the way, good job!
3TriSXSo the US is separated in to two by Americans working for the Koreans/Iranians/Russians and the American resistance.
Just wondering, will US's allies send reinforcements to fight off the bad guys? I mean US have lots of allies in the east.
By the way, good job!
8/1/2013 c14 3TriSX
I agree war is bad, it kills people.
So the KPA is now using different weaponry? Thats makes the KRIA dangerous.
Are there anymore countries in the eastern side that wants to give help?
BTW good job!
3TriSXI agree war is bad, it kills people.
So the KPA is now using different weaponry? Thats makes the KRIA dangerous.
Are there anymore countries in the eastern side that wants to give help?
BTW good job!
7/26/2013 c13 2Terra Booma
Well, at least he broke Haeiji's nose.
Anyway, this is y last review for awhile Ink, as I have camp for 10 days now. XD
2Terra BoomaWell, at least he broke Haeiji's nose.
Anyway, this is y last review for awhile Ink, as I have camp for 10 days now. XD
7/26/2013 c13 3TriSX
So the good guys are working with the bad guys... that's brilliant! Now we can spy on the enemy and give back intel to the UN.
BTW Good Job!
3TriSXSo the good guys are working with the bad guys... that's brilliant! Now we can spy on the enemy and give back intel to the UN.
BTW Good Job!
7/22/2013 c12 2Terra Booma
Cliffhanger...
Anyway, I hope Boone becomes a main character, I woudn't mind a POV from him or Wren.
2Terra BoomaCliffhanger...
Anyway, I hope Boone becomes a main character, I woudn't mind a POV from him or Wren.