for A New Nation7/22/2013 c11 
3TriSX
What could possible go wrong for the baddies? what next, Another country fighting as the bad guys? A group of Paramilitary troops joining the good side?
Good job by the way!
3TriSXWhat could possible go wrong for the baddies? what next, Another country fighting as the bad guys? A group of Paramilitary troops joining the good side?
Good job by the way!
7/15/2013 c9 Terra Booma
"Who lives in a Pine-apple under the sea?"
Congratulations, you have now given me my favorite character ever. I love Mavis XD
"Who lives in a Pine-apple under the sea?"
Congratulations, you have now given me my favorite character ever. I love Mavis XD
7/13/2013 c8 3TriSX
Let the enemy strike your defenses with all they got and you attack their defenseless homes after that. I love that kind of strategy.
How will Akeera plan this situation of hers?
Nice work you done here by the way.
3TriSXLet the enemy strike your defenses with all they got and you attack their defenseless homes after that. I love that kind of strategy.
How will Akeera plan this situation of hers?
Nice work you done here by the way.
7/8/2013 c6 3TriSX
So Akeera reunited with Allen
Boy this is gonna get harder, or maybe easier if you think?
If your stuck or out of ideas, I may help.
oh yeah, keep up the good work
Chris 'SG 17 Out!
3TriSXSo Akeera reunited with Allen
Boy this is gonna get harder, or maybe easier if you think?
If your stuck or out of ideas, I may help.
oh yeah, keep up the good work
Chris 'SG 17 Out!
7/7/2013 c6 10CrystalDemon
I like Allen's character, and the talking to himself in the beginning of the chapter was funny. I'd finished the first five chapters this morning couldn't wait for you to update! I love this story.
10CrystalDemonI like Allen's character, and the talking to himself in the beginning of the chapter was funny. I'd finished the first five chapters this morning couldn't wait for you to update! I love this story.