for A New Nation7/5/2013 c4 
3TriSX
I wonder what happens to Carter, is he dead or does he live? Nice work by the way.
Just one suggestion: Can you make it a four man squad?
3TriSXI wonder what happens to Carter, is he dead or does he live? Nice work by the way.
Just one suggestion: Can you make it a four man squad?
7/5/2013 c2 TriSX
If a sniper has a partner then that partner would be call "Spotter". Great chapter and Keep up the good work!
If a sniper has a partner then that partner would be call "Spotter". Great chapter and Keep up the good work!
7/5/2013 c1 TriSX
Iranians then Russian now Koreans? You just continue to surprise me! Great Sequel by the way.
Iranians then Russian now Koreans? You just continue to surprise me! Great Sequel by the way.
6/27/2013 c4 2Terra Booma
A good chapter! I loved the banter with Allen and his mind, that was hilarious
2Terra BoomaA good chapter! I loved the banter with Allen and his mind, that was hilarious
6/26/2013 c3 Terra Booma
Nice chapter! Getting more and more desperate for everyone, keep up the good work!
Nice chapter! Getting more and more desperate for everyone, keep up the good work!
6/26/2013 c2 2Terra Booma
Good chapter! I'd prefer if Carter lived, but I'm one of those people who can't stands killing people off. So...kinda a biased opinion XD
2Terra BoomaGood chapter! I'd prefer if Carter lived, but I'm one of those people who can't stands killing people off. So...kinda a biased opinion XD
6/24/2013 c1 2Terra Booma
Nice chapter! I like how Allen and Wren are a still part of the story.
You better not let Allen forget Wren.
2Terra BoomaNice chapter! I like how Allen and Wren are a still part of the story.
You better not let Allen forget Wren.