for The Broken Street5/5/2021 c1 DWest
I really enjoyed reading your book. This deserves a lot of audience. Why don't you publish it in NővelStar?And they also have an on-going competition that you might want to join.
I really enjoyed reading your book. This deserves a lot of audience. Why don't you publish it in NővelStar?And they also have an on-going competition that you might want to join.
7/15/2013 c1 
7Distance Navigator
This is a great introduction to a suspense story. I love your way of writing. Maybe using more dark and deep words might make it more thrilling. But I really hope to see more chapters coming soon.
7Distance NavigatorThis is a great introduction to a suspense story. I love your way of writing. Maybe using more dark and deep words might make it more thrilling. But I really hope to see more chapters coming soon.