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7/1/2013 c1 2Eclectic Lion
awww
it was a nice little story, not too long and not too short. Perfect pace and a sweet start to a relationship to boot!
I don't know if you meant it or not (and forgive me if you did mean it) but Jordan didn't quite start that introduction right.
Me llamo/llama _
and
Mi nombre es _
are two ways to introduce yourself and the mixing of the two is a common mishap :p
I just wanted to say that just in case you didn't mean to do that and if you did, again, forgive me.
Great story though! :D

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