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7/2/2013 c1 daughter of Athena and Apollo
I absolutely adored this. Your rhyme and flow was impeccable, and that was absolutely stunning imagery. The only lines that irked me just a tad were, "Decisions that have lead me here, Were made on whims or in fear." The second part of that sounds just a tiny bit awkward.

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