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43fantasybookworm2012
Nice rhyming, as always.
Seems like "true freinds" don't exist for some reason.
I don't know what it is with people now. Maybe it's living into an older age, or thinking that what happens now won't matter in the future.(which may be the case for SOME people but they never think about what they cross or Destiney on their way.)
43fantasybookworm2012Nice rhyming, as always.
Seems like "true freinds" don't exist for some reason.
I don't know what it is with people now. Maybe it's living into an older age, or thinking that what happens now won't matter in the future.(which may be the case for SOME people but they never think about what they cross or Destiney on their way.)
7/10/2013 c1 23Love A Mysterious Thing
Your style on this one is spectacular. The way you have written it and the natural flow of it was remarkable. Truly a talent. I like this and the irony of it in my own life was definitely a wonder... But every stanza, line, phrase, all of it i thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for posting this.
23Love A Mysterious ThingYour style on this one is spectacular. The way you have written it and the natural flow of it was remarkable. Truly a talent. I like this and the irony of it in my own life was definitely a wonder... But every stanza, line, phrase, all of it i thoroughly enjoyed. Thank you for posting this.
7/9/2013 c1 75wordsaresodifficult
I love it! And I don't think people realize how valuable friends are until they aren't there. I cherish my family and the few friends I have because I've learned what it's like without them. Great poem! I love it!
-Robin
75wordsaresodifficultI love it! And I don't think people realize how valuable friends are until they aren't there. I cherish my family and the few friends I have because I've learned what it's like without them. Great poem! I love it!
-Robin
7/9/2013 c1 lymli
I appreciate my friends too, but everybody must go his own way, so you can meet new cool people
I appreciate my friends too, but everybody must go his own way, so you can meet new cool people
7/9/2013 c1 Purplemonkey123
I really liked this, it's attention grabbing, it flows well, and it is true some friendships just don't stand the test of time I guess. This was really good I would love to hear more of your poetry :)
I really liked this, it's attention grabbing, it flows well, and it is true some friendships just don't stand the test of time I guess. This was really good I would love to hear more of your poetry :)