for Psychic Blitz10/7/2014 c1 Punslinger
I like the unusual rhyme scheme as you take us step by step into the soothing release from tension. A nice way to fall into restful sleep.
I like the unusual rhyme scheme as you take us step by step into the soothing release from tension. A nice way to fall into restful sleep.
6/20/2014 c1 
182J.L.Rodriguez
the blissful power of meditation...such a calming, reflective process. It took me many times to fall into trances and now it is as easy as breathing. A very soothing write, hopefully people will read this and realize the potential within them, meditation is only the first process to true awakening.
182J.L.Rodriguezthe blissful power of meditation...such a calming, reflective process. It took me many times to fall into trances and now it is as easy as breathing. A very soothing write, hopefully people will read this and realize the potential within them, meditation is only the first process to true awakening.
7/26/2013 c1 43fantasybookworm2012
Lovely rhyming. That seems to be your forte. Just a quick little poem but it sounded peaceful which is something that seems pretty rare in poetry on here.
43fantasybookworm2012Lovely rhyming. That seems to be your forte. Just a quick little poem but it sounded peaceful which is something that seems pretty rare in poetry on here.
7/13/2013 c1 Purplemonkey123
I read this to myself over and over I really like it. I liked the last four stanzas (or would the be called couplets?) the best. Well done :)
I read this to myself over and over I really like it. I liked the last four stanzas (or would the be called couplets?) the best. Well done :)
7/12/2013 c1 15Naomi Winters
Hm... I think I'm going to memorize this, so I can recite it to myself before bed. Because the first part describes me at bedtime perfectly. It's quite a catchy poem, so I shouldn't have a problem remembering it. (That's a compliment.)
15Naomi WintersHm... I think I'm going to memorize this, so I can recite it to myself before bed. Because the first part describes me at bedtime perfectly. It's quite a catchy poem, so I shouldn't have a problem remembering it. (That's a compliment.)