for Project Genesis10/18/2013 c1 
28Helen Cole
"Ah! This is so sad!" Was my first thought at the first line. Great hook, although makes me scared to keep reading haha
Interesting idea. I'd like to see more. Reminds me a bit of hunger games. I like that you set the scene for the people in the lab, that they're not malicious, just normal people.
Could you please review my story, "On the Other End of the Phone"? I would love to hear your impressions as the story moves along. Please? I saw a review of yours on a "luna's Child" story and you gave some great feedback.
28Helen Cole"Ah! This is so sad!" Was my first thought at the first line. Great hook, although makes me scared to keep reading haha
Interesting idea. I'd like to see more. Reminds me a bit of hunger games. I like that you set the scene for the people in the lab, that they're not malicious, just normal people.
Could you please review my story, "On the Other End of the Phone"? I would love to hear your impressions as the story moves along. Please? I saw a review of yours on a "luna's Child" story and you gave some great feedback.
7/12/2013 c1 1Keli.Anderson
I really like your characters, Tela especially, she seems brave, intelligent, and strong-willed. I love characters like that! Can't wait to read more!
1Keli.AndersonI really like your characters, Tela especially, she seems brave, intelligent, and strong-willed. I love characters like that! Can't wait to read more!