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4/6/2014 c8 1leavesfallingup
This will definitely begin a rapid alteration of Sloane's perspective on John. At least she is finally quitting that job. Bosses in places like that should provide security for the females working for them.
4/6/2014 c8 curiousraspytax
I love it! 3
4/5/2014 c8 clkamp
I just love this story so much. I mean everything about it is just fabulous!
4/5/2014 c8 lirelover
Oh my God! I absolutely LOVE this story! I just started reading it and I just cant seem to stop! I've been wanting to review every single one of your amazingly wonderful chapters but I figured I would just read up to your latest chapter to gush about your awesome talent at story telling to save you and me both time...you so you can focus on updating and all the other stuff I am sure you have to do...and me so that I can focus on reading every word of this story
Thank You!
4/5/2014 c8 echo-echo
I don't know where to start but I love this story. Sloane is not a mold of the typical female lead. The pace is fast but not unrealistic. The only thing that could be said is that there is some repetition. But I wish I could keep reading, I definitely want more.
4/5/2014 c8 9Storm Cycle
wow, just wow you really need to update soon! I really like this story; the characters are so real and the plotline is good too. Please write again soon.
4/5/2014 c8 alchem
Great moments that subtly move the story forward. Thank you for continuing to write.
4/5/2014 c8 Guest
This chapter was so heartwarming, can't wait to see more of John. Keep up the good work! xx
4/5/2014 c8 6cityflux
Yay for an update! It's my first time reviewing this story even though I've been following it since the start, but I must say that I enjoyed this chapter. I feel bad for Sloane about the college thing; I've got a feeling that someone (John, maybe?) will find her application letter and send it to the college. And as for her job, good on her for quitting. Too bad it only took an almost-rape attempt to get her to change her mind. Update soon!
3/19/2014 c7 clkamp
Definitely not expecting that! Very interesting chapter and excited to see where this new development goes.
3/19/2014 c7 33H
I got to say, I love everything you write. I know this chapter may seem unimportant, but it's bound to come back and bite us readers in the ass. So Nina is either going to be cool, or turn into something vindictive. I hope it's the former. Can't wait for more!
3/10/2014 c5 1A.E. Summers
Can you please update soon? I look forward to reading what you post next. :)
2/15/2014 c6 atlalok33
honestly one of my most favorite chapters in this story. i absolutely love the growth and chemistry between sloane and john.
2/10/2014 c6 2renegade01
Aww that was sweet when John stood up for Sloane :-)
2/10/2014 c6 1A.E. Summers
I love it so far! Your doing a great job. One thing that bothers me? Your not updating fast enough! Lol. No but really the ONE thing that bothers me is Sloanes attitude. Shes beginning to be quite annoying with her disagreements and it seems like she yells a lot. Which is understandable for the most part but there needs to be softness in there to balance things.
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