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11/12/2013 c3 Bass line
I think Sloane is too bitterly prideful and stubborn for her own good ._. I see that she cares about her siblings but she is a child herself, throwing useless tantrums and getting jealous when we saw them playing with the dog, all happy.
Anyways good story :)
10/22/2013 c1 Guest
this story is so awesome but could you also update: Hate Is a Strong Word, but in This Case It Applies

10/9/2013 c3 A
So far so good ! I can't wait for more !
10/7/2013 c3 Guest
nice..waiting to read lots more..
10/7/2013 c3 2renegade01
Love the addition of the dog - animals have a way of bringing people closer ;-)

Hehe John was almost scared to assert his authority. I like that its still a little tense between them. Can't wait for more ;-)
10/6/2013 c2 3TheEvergreenShadow
Update soon! I'm really enjoying this :)
10/6/2013 c3 1leavesfallingup
It is difficult when you've been forced to act and think as an adult for a long time and suddenly that responsibility is snatched from you, mostly because you are still not an adult. John seems to be in earnest, and he's handling the situation, and Sloan, as well as he can , but there are bound to be fireworks before the two of them find common ground.

Her uncomfortable awareness of his attractiveness is probably not helping matters. It creates a level of tension that she is not prepared to deal with in the midst of this crisis. Still, she seems too logical to hold on to these grudges forever.

A great story thus far. I look forward to reading more very soon (did that sound like a hint? Cajolery? Maybe I need to take lessons from Charlie).
8/26/2013 c2 hahahi
8/16/2013 c2 7AMessofPickles
I'm really liking this story so far! Can't wait until the next update :D
8/10/2013 c2 abc123
ahhh congrats on the skow nominationssss! update soonnnn!
7/23/2013 c2 atlalok33
omg wow, that was an intense chapter. john seems like a nice guy for taking them in! ahhh, i can already sense the romance between them brewing. update soon!
7/23/2013 c2 1leavesfallingup
There will be a lot of bitterness to get through, but John seems like a good man. The fact that he isn't actualy blood-related also clears the way for other considerations... something that you obviously thought about already, right?

That "Reverend" may be a minister, but he definitely seems to have placed himself and his wife's desires over the needs or desires of Sloane's family. He will probably also try to use his position to overturn John's guardianship... just as his wife will probably use the gossip-chain to spread discord about a young man staying alone in the house with a soon-to-be-eighteen year old girl.
7/22/2013 c2 2WhiteTigress27
I'm really getting into it. I hope there will be a new chapter soon
7/22/2013 c2 1AlmostLoved
Brilliant! I love how strong Sloane is being through all of this! Can't wait for the next chapter! Well done! -AL
7/22/2013 c2 2renegade01
Love it. John's character is great. I like the connection they have already. Beat that Reverend! ;-)
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