for Cinder Creek7/22/2013 c2 
3Sloppy Joe 313
I gotta tell ya' usually I don't read these type of stories but this one is addicting! Keep writing!
3Sloppy Joe 313I gotta tell ya' usually I don't read these type of stories but this one is addicting! Keep writing!
7/22/2013 c2 Guest
Very very gripping...
Very very gripping...
7/18/2013 c1 1leavesfallingup
Minors didn't have many rights until very recently. In cases like this the "responsible" adults could exercise power to get whatever they wanted, including taking children away. What is the timeframe of this story? Until the 1930s teenagers over 16 were actually treated as adults, even in situations like this.
1leavesfallingupMinors didn't have many rights until very recently. In cases like this the "responsible" adults could exercise power to get whatever they wanted, including taking children away. What is the timeframe of this story? Until the 1930s teenagers over 16 were actually treated as adults, even in situations like this.
7/17/2013 c1 atlalok33
Alright, how come you always manage to come up with the best ideas for stories? Seriously? This seems like a magnificent story already, and I cannot wait for the next update for this and Scandalous! You are an aammaazzing author!
Alright, how come you always manage to come up with the best ideas for stories? Seriously? This seems like a magnificent story already, and I cannot wait for the next update for this and Scandalous! You are an aammaazzing author!
7/14/2013 c1 2Tuesday Telegrams
Your writing is really good. The descriptions of Cinder Creek are vivid, and Sloane has a very strong voice. I really like her a lot, and think she'll be a great character to follow. This story reminds me a lot of Winter's Bone (at least at this point, I'm sure that will change a lot in the coming chapters!). Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more!
2Tuesday TelegramsYour writing is really good. The descriptions of Cinder Creek are vivid, and Sloane has a very strong voice. I really like her a lot, and think she'll be a great character to follow. This story reminds me a lot of Winter's Bone (at least at this point, I'm sure that will change a lot in the coming chapters!). Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more!
7/14/2013 c1 2renegade01
I'm definitely intrigued. I love how passionate Sloane was towards the end. Can't wait for more ;-)
2renegade01I'm definitely intrigued. I love how passionate Sloane was towards the end. Can't wait for more ;-)