for Cinder Creek11/24/2016 c15 A
Please update ! This is a major cliffhanger !
Please update ! This is a major cliffhanger !
11/17/2016 c15 A
Omg please update !
Omg please update !
10/30/2016 c1 GDM Shiva
OMG I waited so much for this! English is not my first language, that why I usually refrain from commenting, but I've been reading your story since the beginning and waiting anxiously for every new chapter. I longed nearly as much as the characters for the kiss on the last chapter. It was perfect! I hope we have more insight on Johns mind from now on! Keep the good work!
OMG I waited so much for this! English is not my first language, that why I usually refrain from commenting, but I've been reading your story since the beginning and waiting anxiously for every new chapter. I longed nearly as much as the characters for the kiss on the last chapter. It was perfect! I hope we have more insight on Johns mind from now on! Keep the good work!
10/17/2016 c7 
2Neo Rulez
This chapter really surprise me! I never thought me know would you gosh the story is getting good and good each time I read it.
2Neo RulezThis chapter really surprise me! I never thought me know would you gosh the story is getting good and good each time I read it.
10/17/2016 c6 Neo Rulez
John told the Dahls! Love this chapter! Hate the Dahls but wonderful chapter.
John told the Dahls! Love this chapter! Hate the Dahls but wonderful chapter.
10/17/2016 c5 Neo Rulez
Damn that was a heated argument between John and Sloane. It is good to see that Charlie is opening up to John I like that part
Damn that was a heated argument between John and Sloane. It is good to see that Charlie is opening up to John I like that part
10/16/2016 c15 Ilsa with an I
Dammit John, stop being so noble and chivalrous, we're all dying over here! I suppose if Sloane has to wait, so do we. I bet that defense attorney is kicking herself, though.
Dammit John, stop being so noble and chivalrous, we're all dying over here! I suppose if Sloane has to wait, so do we. I bet that defense attorney is kicking herself, though.
10/16/2016 c15 ObsidianSky
Yay! They are finally getting somewhere! Thanks for the update! Keep it up!
Yay! They are finally getting somewhere! Thanks for the update! Keep it up!
10/14/2016 c15 shinju asuka
Aah... Love the pace. I'm glad she was stuborn also in romance department!
Aah... Love the pace. I'm glad she was stuborn also in romance department!