for Loneliness10/28/2015 c9 Guest
Great the story, would like to read more of it if you ever plan on coming back to it. I think it would be realistic if Rider had to keep working through his issues more and seeing Juni continue to help him. I would also like to see their romantic relationship progress farther over time, but maybe with a few stumbling blocks they have to overcome to keep things interesting maybe, just suggestions as I have no idea what you have planned but so far it's been very enjoyable. I wish more people would write this type of hurt/comfort I makes me feel at home as someone who has suffered a bit myself.
Great the story, would like to read more of it if you ever plan on coming back to it. I think it would be realistic if Rider had to keep working through his issues more and seeing Juni continue to help him. I would also like to see their romantic relationship progress farther over time, but maybe with a few stumbling blocks they have to overcome to keep things interesting maybe, just suggestions as I have no idea what you have planned but so far it's been very enjoyable. I wish more people would write this type of hurt/comfort I makes me feel at home as someone who has suffered a bit myself.
7/31/2014 c1 
12Trade Winds
This first chapter really made me laugh. I have to say, I like Rider. He is unintentionally funny! And Juniper's come backs were great. Nice work on writing the dialogue between them, very witty and sharp!
12Trade WindsThis first chapter really made me laugh. I have to say, I like Rider. He is unintentionally funny! And Juniper's come backs were great. Nice work on writing the dialogue between them, very witty and sharp!
7/29/2014 c9 1FireIceandPoison
Oh please please please update soon! This story is just so gah! it's so amazing there isn't even a word to describe how amazing this is. I love Rider so much it's not even funny. My heart hurts from loving, and my jaw hurts from laughing, my eyes were wet with unshed tears, seriously what have you done to me?
1FireIceandPoisonOh please please please update soon! This story is just so gah! it's so amazing there isn't even a word to describe how amazing this is. I love Rider so much it's not even funny. My heart hurts from loving, and my jaw hurts from laughing, my eyes were wet with unshed tears, seriously what have you done to me?
7/20/2014 c20 Love Ya
I love your story. This is the only one I've read so far, but I an going to look at your other ones as soon as I have time. Keep writing and don't ever, ever, stop!
I love your story. This is the only one I've read so far, but I an going to look at your other ones as soon as I have time. Keep writing and don't ever, ever, stop!
7/9/2014 c19 ecthelion5
An interesting story, but I was expecting riders life to have been a bit more biter and dramatic, or maybe he struck out at his mother and killed her that way? I mean, it was getting kind of obvious that's who it was, but a car accident! That's just anticlimactic.
But great job on the story! Thanks for writing and keep it up! Maybe if the grammar was better you could get it published! (That obviously wasn't funny, but I have a really bad since of humor, ha!) Hope you keep writing!
An interesting story, but I was expecting riders life to have been a bit more biter and dramatic, or maybe he struck out at his mother and killed her that way? I mean, it was getting kind of obvious that's who it was, but a car accident! That's just anticlimactic.
But great job on the story! Thanks for writing and keep it up! Maybe if the grammar was better you could get it published! (That obviously wasn't funny, but I have a really bad since of humor, ha!) Hope you keep writing!
7/9/2014 c18 ecthelion5
I'm not sure if the end was a cliff hanger or not but yeah and I think it might be from a another chapter but toddy said "just a few minutes" and then three seconds later he says "make that a few more minutes" again! But anyway, it was a great story! Thanks for writing!:)
I'm not sure if the end was a cliff hanger or not but yeah and I think it might be from a another chapter but toddy said "just a few minutes" and then three seconds later he says "make that a few more minutes" again! But anyway, it was a great story! Thanks for writing!:)
7/9/2014 c17 ecthelion5
No more cliff hangers? :( oh well, great job on the story and are you ever going to explain what happened between June and drew? Thanks for the story!
No more cliff hangers? :( oh well, great job on the story and are you ever going to explain what happened between June and drew? Thanks for the story!