for There is No Crying in Softball9/26/2013 c1 
23TheForgottenWarrior
First of all, softball has always been my sport - my passion and there have been times I almost quitted. I know how it feels, especially reading this line by line. Stay strong and realize that you'll always keep the memories with you.
Excellent emotion as usual and I like the shorty, "choppy" rhythm. Keep on writing.
Forgotten, yet now remembered
23TheForgottenWarriorFirst of all, softball has always been my sport - my passion and there have been times I almost quitted. I know how it feels, especially reading this line by line. Stay strong and realize that you'll always keep the memories with you.
Excellent emotion as usual and I like the shorty, "choppy" rhythm. Keep on writing.
Forgotten, yet now remembered