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1Sylvia SparrowTounge
This was posted a few years ago, so you probably won’t see this, but I loved the story and I’m sad that the sequel is on hold (and has been for a few years). I like how Alex lost some of the coldness she had at the beginning, but not enough of it to make it seem like it wasn’t there in the first place. I wish we got to find out more about Ben (immortality/not), Megan, Drew, and whether or not Connor was actually related to Alex or not (I’m assuming that’s what Alex meant when she said she has a suspicion about his relation to her haha), how he ended up at the facility like two days after she saw him at the end, and how he ended up staying with his grandfather. (Although these might be addressed in the sequel so that last sentence might be irrelevant). Anyways, thank you for writing this, it was a fun read and I’m glad I got to opportunity to do so :)
1Sylvia SparrowToungeThis was posted a few years ago, so you probably won’t see this, but I loved the story and I’m sad that the sequel is on hold (and has been for a few years). I like how Alex lost some of the coldness she had at the beginning, but not enough of it to make it seem like it wasn’t there in the first place. I wish we got to find out more about Ben (immortality/not), Megan, Drew, and whether or not Connor was actually related to Alex or not (I’m assuming that’s what Alex meant when she said she has a suspicion about his relation to her haha), how he ended up at the facility like two days after she saw him at the end, and how he ended up staying with his grandfather. (Although these might be addressed in the sequel so that last sentence might be irrelevant). Anyways, thank you for writing this, it was a fun read and I’m glad I got to opportunity to do so :)
2/18/2014 c54 Aquade
I love Alex and I'm glad you're not making her go away. Anyway, I'm going to read the next two chapters (the one with the spinoff) now...XD
I love Alex and I'm glad you're not making her go away. Anyway, I'm going to read the next two chapters (the one with the spinoff) now...XD
1/22/2014 c1 Nightwingz
Loved the beginning. There are some small mistakes but they are easy to follow and don't confuse. Great beginning and I'll be sure to read more soon :)
Loved the beginning. There are some small mistakes but they are easy to follow and don't confuse. Great beginning and I'll be sure to read more soon :)
10/14/2013 c54 Drierwor
At last the final page has been turned and the cover has been closed on a very intriguing read. This novel was light and fun to read and was very much enjoyed. I definitely would definitely like to spinoffs for Alex, because you are right her sarcastic character is to much to let it sit and go to waste. Another thought that occured to me is possibly doing some spinoffs with Ben since he does disappear for a while to see what happens to him from his point of view.
Well last thing I have to say is...
Congratulations Reign of Rayne. :D
Sincerely,
Drierwor
At last the final page has been turned and the cover has been closed on a very intriguing read. This novel was light and fun to read and was very much enjoyed. I definitely would definitely like to spinoffs for Alex, because you are right her sarcastic character is to much to let it sit and go to waste. Another thought that occured to me is possibly doing some spinoffs with Ben since he does disappear for a while to see what happens to him from his point of view.
Well last thing I have to say is...
Congratulations Reign of Rayne. :D
Sincerely,
Drierwor
10/13/2013 c54 3TriSX
Thank you for writing this awesome story, I have been reading this from the very start. This is your masterpiece, I hope that you will create more stories, just like what you said: "Don't be afraid to use you imaginations."
Your story became part of my inspiration when I first looked it up in Fiction Press. In each day I read it, I can feel that I can finish one chapter in under 5 minutes or maybe a day.
So this will be my last review to this story, meh... I know you'll make spin-offs anyways so I'll be seeing them
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-Chris 'SG-17 Out!
3TriSXThank you for writing this awesome story, I have been reading this from the very start. This is your masterpiece, I hope that you will create more stories, just like what you said: "Don't be afraid to use you imaginations."
Your story became part of my inspiration when I first looked it up in Fiction Press. In each day I read it, I can feel that I can finish one chapter in under 5 minutes or maybe a day.
So this will be my last review to this story, meh... I know you'll make spin-offs anyways so I'll be seeing them
.
-Chris 'SG-17 Out!
10/13/2013 c53 TriSX
Oh noes... its the end! But what will be the conclution? Maybe something possible on the future? Since the story is over, I'll would like to thank you for writing this... you did a very good job! I'm sure you'll be very sucessful in the next story you make.
Oh noes... its the end! But what will be the conclution? Maybe something possible on the future? Since the story is over, I'll would like to thank you for writing this... you did a very good job! I'm sure you'll be very sucessful in the next story you make.
10/13/2013 c51 Drierwor
Reign of Rayne,
So we have come to chapter 50. Wow! Congratulations on reaching this milestone in your story. Must say the last 2 chapters have been filled with action much appreciated. And I love the turn of events that have taken place for Alex. Furthermore, I sense that Ben is wanting to take the relationship he has with Alex to a deeper level. Unfortunately for Ben that may be hard than he believes it will be. ;) Spinoffs will be interesting and can't wait to read some of them. I hope school is going good for you also.
Reign of Rayne,
So we have come to chapter 50. Wow! Congratulations on reaching this milestone in your story. Must say the last 2 chapters have been filled with action much appreciated. And I love the turn of events that have taken place for Alex. Furthermore, I sense that Ben is wanting to take the relationship he has with Alex to a deeper level. Unfortunately for Ben that may be hard than he believes it will be. ;) Spinoffs will be interesting and can't wait to read some of them. I hope school is going good for you also.
10/12/2013 c50 TriSX
Nearing the end? What coicidence, I'm nearky ending my story too.
I'm suprised that you got 50 chapters so far...
Keep up the good work too...
Nearing the end? What coicidence, I'm nearky ending my story too.
I'm suprised that you got 50 chapters so far...
Keep up the good work too...
10/11/2013 c49 TriSX
Meh, First comment of Alex's/Sam's/Sky's/27's Video: "Wow. Alex is kinda Hot!"
When I red that part I was like. "This dude? Seriously?"
You did a great job, also Alex showing herself to the world and apologizing for her out of control "Rampage" was the best thing to do... I think.
Oh and, 50 Chapter milestone next. Hope you keep on doing the good work.
Suggestion: One final visit to Carter. And probably some terrorist robbing a bank and then Alex and co. somewhat beats up the terrorist?
Meh, First comment of Alex's/Sam's/Sky's/27's Video: "Wow. Alex is kinda Hot!"
When I red that part I was like. "This dude? Seriously?"
You did a great job, also Alex showing herself to the world and apologizing for her out of control "Rampage" was the best thing to do... I think.
Oh and, 50 Chapter milestone next. Hope you keep on doing the good work.
Suggestion: One final visit to Carter. And probably some terrorist robbing a bank and then Alex and co. somewhat beats up the terrorist?
10/7/2013 c1 Health class
ERMAHGERD THIS IS SOOOOO COOOOOL! I KNEW YOU COULD WRITE BUT DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANGGGGG
- the chick that thinks your last name is still weird
ERMAHGERD THIS IS SOOOOO COOOOOL! I KNEW YOU COULD WRITE BUT DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANGGGGG
- the chick that thinks your last name is still weird
10/8/2013 c45 Drierwor
Reign of Rayne,
Loving the story so far. Just finished reach it from chapter 1 to chapter 44. Must say I really enjoyed the adventure so far. Unfortunately I'm not one of the best at reviews because 1. I'm horrible at grammar. 2. I like to allow a story to develop from the authors perspective/concept instead of others since its the reason for me reading it originally. 3. Not many errors that I have seen through out the story a couple of grammatical errors. 4. It's a fiction story thats based off of a government experiment that did not go right and of course "they"(you know those who are watching) decide to make, Sam, Solider 27, Sky or Alex, the ultimate killing machine. 5. Alex cant die so pretty much makes any mistakes she does not really matter to her. Howerver, providing that she starts to care for certain people, Carter and Ben, helps bring the humanity back into Alex. 6. I have enjoyed the cliff hangers provided in some of the chapters. It builds up the suspense which some may not enjoy at all. 7. Wow apparently I had more to say than I thought. Also don't forget its your story write it the way you want to and then see who enjoy the story. Trying to please the masses has never worked, because someone is never happy. Any how love the story and sitting here waiting for the next chapter... "Humm kind of lonely in here. (-_-)... Guess I'll go for a walk."
Reign of Rayne,
Loving the story so far. Just finished reach it from chapter 1 to chapter 44. Must say I really enjoyed the adventure so far. Unfortunately I'm not one of the best at reviews because 1. I'm horrible at grammar. 2. I like to allow a story to develop from the authors perspective/concept instead of others since its the reason for me reading it originally. 3. Not many errors that I have seen through out the story a couple of grammatical errors. 4. It's a fiction story thats based off of a government experiment that did not go right and of course "they"(you know those who are watching) decide to make, Sam, Solider 27, Sky or Alex, the ultimate killing machine. 5. Alex cant die so pretty much makes any mistakes she does not really matter to her. Howerver, providing that she starts to care for certain people, Carter and Ben, helps bring the humanity back into Alex. 6. I have enjoyed the cliff hangers provided in some of the chapters. It builds up the suspense which some may not enjoy at all. 7. Wow apparently I had more to say than I thought. Also don't forget its your story write it the way you want to and then see who enjoy the story. Trying to please the masses has never worked, because someone is never happy. Any how love the story and sitting here waiting for the next chapter... "Humm kind of lonely in here. (-_-)... Guess I'll go for a walk."