for The Reality of Happily Ever After8/5/2013 c1 ctolhouse
umm hiiiii! I haven't read any chapters yet but I wanted to say hello! it's been years! I don't come on as often so this was a nice surprise, I'm glad you're writing the sequel (finally) ;)
umm hiiiii! I haven't read any chapters yet but I wanted to say hello! it's been years! I don't come on as often so this was a nice surprise, I'm glad you're writing the sequel (finally) ;)
7/30/2013 c6 belugaaa
I'm obsessed with this story. thank you so much for the quick update! rose was the one that helped chase through the botch alley abortion! didn't see that coming. i like how rose's character and how important she is to Chastane and Devon (and vice versa) is developed at the end here. by the way, would 'widower' be a more accurate term for Devon?
I'm obsessed with this story. thank you so much for the quick update! rose was the one that helped chase through the botch alley abortion! didn't see that coming. i like how rose's character and how important she is to Chastane and Devon (and vice versa) is developed at the end here. by the way, would 'widower' be a more accurate term for Devon?
7/30/2013 c5 belugaaa
oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh, i read the reality of fairy tales ages ago when you still had it here on fp (and i just bought it), and i am so glad you came back to post this here. you still have an uncanny ability for storytelling, and as much as i hate reading your chapters because the situation that Chastane and Devon are in now is absolutely heartbreaking, i still love your writing. i can't wait to read more!
oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh, i read the reality of fairy tales ages ago when you still had it here on fp (and i just bought it), and i am so glad you came back to post this here. you still have an uncanny ability for storytelling, and as much as i hate reading your chapters because the situation that Chastane and Devon are in now is absolutely heartbreaking, i still love your writing. i can't wait to read more!
7/30/2013 c5 Grace
I like that this story is about an older couple, although the themes are dark. I feel the tension, sense of betrayal, and heartache when I read you dialogue even as I try to distill what happened in the 10 years leading up to this point. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long! Keep posting!
I like that this story is about an older couple, although the themes are dark. I feel the tension, sense of betrayal, and heartache when I read you dialogue even as I try to distill what happened in the 10 years leading up to this point. Please don't keep us in suspense for too long! Keep posting!
7/30/2013 c4 
1Liat86
I'm really glad you're back here and writing- I used to read all your stories...
But I have to say- this one is exhausting to read. Too much of a professional lingo that no one understands, too many secrets and unexplained behaviors. It's only the first chapter and already I'm skipping certain sentences so I'll feel the story is moving along.
I hope you take this as a constructive criticism, I really love your voice in these stories but you need to lighten the tone a little bit.
1Liat86I'm really glad you're back here and writing- I used to read all your stories...
But I have to say- this one is exhausting to read. Too much of a professional lingo that no one understands, too many secrets and unexplained behaviors. It's only the first chapter and already I'm skipping certain sentences so I'll feel the story is moving along.
I hope you take this as a constructive criticism, I really love your voice in these stories but you need to lighten the tone a little bit.