for Schnecke5/25/2017 c9 Guest
Oh my god that was beautful. I fell in love with Imogen and Callan and this story. I should be doing work, but here I am procrastinating because this work is amazing. Hope to see you update soon; it's 2017 but I'll still be waiting!
Oh my god that was beautful. I fell in love with Imogen and Callan and this story. I should be doing work, but here I am procrastinating because this work is amazing. Hope to see you update soon; it's 2017 but I'll still be waiting!
7/6/2014 c9 Ishundania
Chapter 9 format is weird. The first sentence of every paragraph reads as p style "margin: 20px 0px; font-family: Arial, Helvetica ... than your story. Could you please fix that so I can read the whole story. I cannot wait to ready your story!
Chapter 9 format is weird. The first sentence of every paragraph reads as p style "margin: 20px 0px; font-family: Arial, Helvetica ... than your story. Could you please fix that so I can read the whole story. I cannot wait to ready your story!
5/31/2014 c7 Maddy
Oh please update soon! Can't wait to see what happens with callan and her!
Oh please update soon! Can't wait to see what happens with callan and her!
6/1/2014 c7 Staying.Alivex
Oh wow this is amazing o.o Really interesting idea though - using a German Nazi, I mean -and it's great! The last chapter broke my heart /3 Keep updating it's amazing!x
Oh wow this is amazing o.o Really interesting idea though - using a German Nazi, I mean -and it's great! The last chapter broke my heart /3 Keep updating it's amazing!x
4/1/2014 c6 Jenni Drocks
So good! I love this story. I'm really into stories that take place in the past and the WWII era has been pulling my attention lately. Do have to point out the "threw" mistakes it annoyingly sounds exactly the same as through, but other than that your story couldn't be more awesome!
So good! I love this story. I'm really into stories that take place in the past and the WWII era has been pulling my attention lately. Do have to point out the "threw" mistakes it annoyingly sounds exactly the same as through, but other than that your story couldn't be more awesome!
1/1/2014 c1 
2AbiSnow1998
Just looking through the archives and this caught my eye. I like stories set in or around the World War Two era, and I enjoy baking. So the bakery part caught my eye too.
But yeah, I love how it's done and the storyline. The characters are well developed and I think this is written incredibly well. It's intriguing and I can't really fault it. I just hope to see it finished
2AbiSnow1998Just looking through the archives and this caught my eye. I like stories set in or around the World War Two era, and I enjoy baking. So the bakery part caught my eye too.
But yeah, I love how it's done and the storyline. The characters are well developed and I think this is written incredibly well. It's intriguing and I can't really fault it. I just hope to see it finished
11/7/2013 c4 belladorra
Ugh. You keep us hanging in a very crucial time! Update please :)
Ugh. You keep us hanging in a very crucial time! Update please :)
8/11/2013 c3 Jesse
Please update soon! I love this story!
Please update soon! I love this story!
8/1/2013 c1 Guest
I love WWII story! I hope you continue this one.
I love WWII story! I hope you continue this one.
8/1/2013 c1 3perfect.fluke
I like the idea of this story, so far I like your writing as well.. But it's a bit hard to follow since most of the conversations are French and German. Maybe keep it that way but have her translate in her head/narration? I've read plenty of books that use that type of format and it doesn't take away from the story at all. In fact the foreign language makes it all the more interesting. Just a thought, no flames.
I'd like to see how this goes anyways. Keep writing!
3perfect.flukeI like the idea of this story, so far I like your writing as well.. But it's a bit hard to follow since most of the conversations are French and German. Maybe keep it that way but have her translate in her head/narration? I've read plenty of books that use that type of format and it doesn't take away from the story at all. In fact the foreign language makes it all the more interesting. Just a thought, no flames.
I'd like to see how this goes anyways. Keep writing!