for Yin Yang8/29/2013 c1 
22Michael Urban
"In the dark too / our champagne bubbles/ as long as you don't upset the glass" (Poetry/Haiku/German: 'Liebes Haiku') - What's the situation? Dark? Light? Or some others... ?
22Michael Urban"In the dark too / our champagne bubbles/ as long as you don't upset the glass" (Poetry/Haiku/German: 'Liebes Haiku') - What's the situation? Dark? Light? Or some others... ?
8/1/2013 c1 29Ink Of Many Shades
Very nice... except: of fates fatal hand? I'm not sure where the apostrophe goes, and why Fate's hand would be anything except fatal...
29Ink Of Many ShadesVery nice... except: of fates fatal hand? I'm not sure where the apostrophe goes, and why Fate's hand would be anything except fatal...