
10/11/2013 c4
5Anjielle
I like this chapter...dark and deep. Are you going to explore Cat's past in the next chapter or so?

I like this chapter...dark and deep. Are you going to explore Cat's past in the next chapter or so?
8/31/2013 c2
4Michelle1236
This story is so good and so well written! I love Cat's character! I don't really know what Riley's deal is... Either way I'm excited for more! Please continue :)

This story is so good and so well written! I love Cat's character! I don't really know what Riley's deal is... Either way I'm excited for more! Please continue :)
8/10/2013 c2
5Anjielle
Wow, I actually can't see Riley and Cat getting together. He sounds like a jerk. If he was in a class of mine in real life, I'd absolutely die...lol.

Wow, I actually can't see Riley and Cat getting together. He sounds like a jerk. If he was in a class of mine in real life, I'd absolutely die...lol.
8/10/2013 c1 Anjielle
Wow, this is a well-written chapter although cliché, yeah, haha! This makes me want to read further to see what comes next. Good job, although in the sentence where Katerina is yelling, "Catalyst! If you're not out of the door in ten minutes you'll be late getting the rest of your books, and then you might as well miss your first day of college," make sure there's an exclamation point at the end, otherwise it won't sound as if she's actually yelling.
Wow, this is a well-written chapter although cliché, yeah, haha! This makes me want to read further to see what comes next. Good job, although in the sentence where Katerina is yelling, "Catalyst! If you're not out of the door in ten minutes you'll be late getting the rest of your books, and then you might as well miss your first day of college," make sure there's an exclamation point at the end, otherwise it won't sound as if she's actually yelling.