for Best Lane Plans9/12/2013 c16 MintyChapstick
Yes pls, sign me up to be Rose too! I love the banter back and forth between all your characters, it reminds me so much of my group of friends, it feels really realistic.
Yes pls, sign me up to be Rose too! I love the banter back and forth between all your characters, it reminds me so much of my group of friends, it feels really realistic.
9/10/2013 c14 
1lovesyoumore
Seriously in love with this! Fictionpress needs more superhero slash. I can't wait for more!
1lovesyoumoreSeriously in love with this! Fictionpress needs more superhero slash. I can't wait for more!
9/9/2013 c15 SophieStar
Hehe, love it. More updates!
Hehe, love it. More updates!
9/9/2013 c14 helinS
Thank you for updating so quickly. This chapter was very sweet and it shows how close Kyle and Lane already are. Loved it.
Thank you for updating so quickly. This chapter was very sweet and it shows how close Kyle and Lane already are. Loved it.
9/9/2013 c14 Guest
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9/9/2013 c14 GUESTT
Sweet update, and thanks so much. Can't be easy with a busy schedule so it is much appreciated. I have been so disillusioned by authors that have left good stories rarely updated or unfinished so thanks for not being one of them. Hugs!
Sweet update, and thanks so much. Can't be easy with a busy schedule so it is much appreciated. I have been so disillusioned by authors that have left good stories rarely updated or unfinished so thanks for not being one of them. Hugs!
9/9/2013 c14 Arggh TOO SHORT
. I like your writing style and character development and overall just plain love the way the story is going but you're killing me with these tantalizing tidbits, I swear I'd keel over right now if I didn't have the burning hope that you'll post another segment real soon and there's just no way I'm dying before this story ends... Anyway, keep up the awesome work and please update soon .
. I like your writing style and character development and overall just plain love the way the story is going but you're killing me with these tantalizing tidbits, I swear I'd keel over right now if I didn't have the burning hope that you'll post another segment real soon and there's just no way I'm dying before this story ends... Anyway, keep up the awesome work and please update soon .
9/7/2013 c12 InsanityAndBeyond
hahahha.
This chapter surprised just because for some reason i had the idea that they had progressed to that stage in their relationship yet, it seemed they were taking things slowly. however, I was very happy with the lane/kyle interaction, since it was sparse in the last two chapters.
Plus, if the first line of a chapter succeeds in making someone spit tea all over their screen, you know you've done a good job!
Kyle is SUCH a softie I love it. If anyone's whipped it's him.
I'm interested to see if the storyline progresses. I'm wondering if their will be a meetup between Lane's ex and Kyle, and when kyle tells Lane he knows about teh superhero stuff etc, or other update so frequently, but because I love this story, it seems like forever. Anyway, long review!
hahahha.
This chapter surprised just because for some reason i had the idea that they had progressed to that stage in their relationship yet, it seemed they were taking things slowly. however, I was very happy with the lane/kyle interaction, since it was sparse in the last two chapters.
Plus, if the first line of a chapter succeeds in making someone spit tea all over their screen, you know you've done a good job!
Kyle is SUCH a softie I love it. If anyone's whipped it's him.
I'm interested to see if the storyline progresses. I'm wondering if their will be a meetup between Lane's ex and Kyle, and when kyle tells Lane he knows about teh superhero stuff etc, or other update so frequently, but because I love this story, it seems like forever. Anyway, long review!
9/6/2013 c12 MintyChapstick
Ohhh haha yeah Lane is reaaaaalllly pushing his luck here! That better be one damn big emergency he had to attend to! :P Also I really like the switching roles thingy that they do, you would think that a big, tough superhero would be the dominant one (I know that's kinda cliche) and I like how it's Kyle who is topping instead.
Ohhh haha yeah Lane is reaaaaalllly pushing his luck here! That better be one damn big emergency he had to attend to! :P Also I really like the switching roles thingy that they do, you would think that a big, tough superhero would be the dominant one (I know that's kinda cliche) and I like how it's Kyle who is topping instead.
9/5/2013 c12 SophieStar
Great! :) please continue
Great! :) please continue
9/5/2013 c12 Raccoon Loon
Hahaha. I think this scene fits in pretty well, continuing on the troubles Kyle has whenever Lane gets called to superhero duty. Kyle definitely deserves a lot for putting up with it. Also, it's hilarious.
Hahaha. I think this scene fits in pretty well, continuing on the troubles Kyle has whenever Lane gets called to superhero duty. Kyle definitely deserves a lot for putting up with it. Also, it's hilarious.
9/5/2013 c12 twilightserius
oh yup that would be a breaker. no touching n sex for at least a week even crueler no flirting. nah thatt might make lane cry or be all depressed. sigh poor kyle he has it rough even the spouses or partners of reg everyday heros get more nookie n quality time with vacation so days at a time
oh yup that would be a breaker. no touching n sex for at least a week even crueler no flirting. nah thatt might make lane cry or be all depressed. sigh poor kyle he has it rough even the spouses or partners of reg everyday heros get more nookie n quality time with vacation so days at a time
9/4/2013 c11 SophieStar
So I really liked it and I'm sure ill sound stupid but I did not realize Kyle was a guy till a few chapters ago. I like the story alot but for the slower people who didn't catch the subtle hints you should come out and say it. But I def love his character and the hero theme story :D
So I really liked it and I'm sure ill sound stupid but I did not realize Kyle was a guy till a few chapters ago. I like the story alot but for the slower people who didn't catch the subtle hints you should come out and say it. But I def love his character and the hero theme story :D
9/4/2013 c11 guesst
You are doing a great job, no worries. Drabbles are fine, adds to the story...loving it so far!
You are doing a great job, no worries. Drabbles are fine, adds to the story...loving it so far!
9/4/2013 c11 MintyChapstick
I like the drabble chapters, they're nice little slices of life and Kyle has an entertaining personality which helps, but I miss Lane and Kyle actually hanging out too. :(
I like the drabble chapters, they're nice little slices of life and Kyle has an entertaining personality which helps, but I miss Lane and Kyle actually hanging out too. :(