for Best Lane Plans2/10/2014 c40 Sarcasticlittledevil
What the actual hell just happened? I don't know what I expected but, that wasn't it. I still loved it. Great chapter.
What the actual hell just happened? I don't know what I expected but, that wasn't it. I still loved it. Great chapter.
2/10/2014 c40 
3Megsi
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA.
Philippe. Omg. Really?
At first I was like 'Philippe? Who's Philippe?' But then I was like 'no way, not Cedric's Philippe?'
I know it's not that funny but holy cow that's SO unexpected, that's even better than Kyle's mum being in on it!
So glad you updated! Congrats on winning NaNoWriMo!
3MegsiHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA.
Philippe. Omg. Really?
At first I was like 'Philippe? Who's Philippe?' But then I was like 'no way, not Cedric's Philippe?'
I know it's not that funny but holy cow that's SO unexpected, that's even better than Kyle's mum being in on it!
So glad you updated! Congrats on winning NaNoWriMo!
11/16/2013 c35 Tarrant
So... enjoying this a lot so far. But one thing did bug me with this chapter. You set up previously that the same Batman movies exist as in our universe, but now suddenly Batman and the Joker are real in-universe. I get why you did it: you needed a villain and a hero that were suitably high-profile, but they hadn't been set up earlier, so using Batman was a lot less awkward than explaining somone new out of nowhere. But still, it's a bit jarring.
So... enjoying this a lot so far. But one thing did bug me with this chapter. You set up previously that the same Batman movies exist as in our universe, but now suddenly Batman and the Joker are real in-universe. I get why you did it: you needed a villain and a hero that were suitably high-profile, but they hadn't been set up earlier, so using Batman was a lot less awkward than explaining somone new out of nowhere. But still, it's a bit jarring.
11/8/2013 c39 4Angel Hertz
Okay... I take it back...
but still, poke his eyes with twigs and Kyle's mom... drown her in horse poop...:3
4Angel HertzOkay... I take it back...
but still, poke his eyes with twigs and Kyle's mom... drown her in horse poop...:3
11/8/2013 c38 Angel Hertz
I knew it! I knew it! It was hiiim! *pointing accusing finger*
Poke his eye out with a stick! Poke it!
Let him feel the pain! Mwahahaha!
*Psycho...*
I knew it! I knew it! It was hiiim! *pointing accusing finger*
Poke his eye out with a stick! Poke it!
Let him feel the pain! Mwahahaha!
*Psycho...*
11/7/2013 c39 RobinIsley
I just love Kyle and Nikki I didn't see the last part coming though, I was wondering about your angle with Ky's mom but this? I hope to read more from, what you write is awesome!
I just love Kyle and Nikki I didn't see the last part coming though, I was wondering about your angle with Ky's mom but this? I hope to read more from, what you write is awesome!
11/6/2013 c20 Kilian Grey
Cute calm... now comes the storm. Yikes I'm afraid.
It's late, so I will go to sleep and read the next chapter later. No nightmares for me.
Cute calm... now comes the storm. Yikes I'm afraid.
It's late, so I will go to sleep and read the next chapter later. No nightmares for me.