for Love Thy Enemy1/14/2014 c2 Songbird227
Wow i love it. I found a few grammatical errors but it is very intriguing. Can't wait to read more.
Wow i love it. I found a few grammatical errors but it is very intriguing. Can't wait to read more.
1/6/2014 c16 
2Isla Corinne
Why, oh, why do you have to leave us hanging like that?! I wanna know! :) Can't wait to find out what's going to happen in the next chapter.
I really liked this chapter. Not only for the amazing bit at the end, but for the quote and what Darius said at the beginning. For some reason, it made Darius a little more human - a little bit more real for me. Maybe I'm just partial because my own mom keeps inspirational quotes up on the fridge. Maybe it's because he admits that his biggest fear is failing Pro and I just love that he cares so much for her.
Either way I loved this chapter from the beginning to the end and I can't wait for the next!
2Isla CorinneWhy, oh, why do you have to leave us hanging like that?! I wanna know! :) Can't wait to find out what's going to happen in the next chapter.
I really liked this chapter. Not only for the amazing bit at the end, but for the quote and what Darius said at the beginning. For some reason, it made Darius a little more human - a little bit more real for me. Maybe I'm just partial because my own mom keeps inspirational quotes up on the fridge. Maybe it's because he admits that his biggest fear is failing Pro and I just love that he cares so much for her.
Either way I loved this chapter from the beginning to the end and I can't wait for the next!
1/3/2014 c15 2Isla Corinne
Darius is so sweet! Bless his heart for caring so much for Prosperity. This was such a heart-string-pulling chapter and I can't wait to read more of them! I love Darius' and Prosperity's interactions with each other.
2Isla CorinneDarius is so sweet! Bless his heart for caring so much for Prosperity. This was such a heart-string-pulling chapter and I can't wait to read more of them! I love Darius' and Prosperity's interactions with each other.
1/3/2014 c14 Isla Corinne
Wow! This just gets better and better. Can't wait to read more of Pro and Darius! Heading on to Ch. 15 now!
Wow! This just gets better and better. Can't wait to read more of Pro and Darius! Heading on to Ch. 15 now!
1/3/2014 c15 lord syyn
The guilt is strong with this one.
I hope there are quite a few more chapters coming too this is my top watched story.
Its good to see new ideas and conflicts, and you write them well. Bit of a triangle with the 3 of them, sort of anyway. Just me or is Darius becoming a bit more desperate now?
Keep it up and i look forward to the next 40 or so chapters :D
The guilt is strong with this one.
I hope there are quite a few more chapters coming too this is my top watched story.
Its good to see new ideas and conflicts, and you write them well. Bit of a triangle with the 3 of them, sort of anyway. Just me or is Darius becoming a bit more desperate now?
Keep it up and i look forward to the next 40 or so chapters :D
1/2/2014 c14 EternityLuv
Holy shit...
I think I have a new favorite chapter.
I ought to beat you for that cliffhanger. .
Holy shit...
I think I have a new favorite chapter.
I ought to beat you for that cliffhanger. .
1/2/2014 c4 6Queen-Knightess
So far, so good! Love it! And did I mention I love Prosperity's nickname? Pro is AWESOME! I love where this is going. Goodness, leukemia. Didn't see that coming! But I'm glad Pro's alive. Wouldn't be much of a story if she had died at twelve.
Anyway! I'm going to finish the rest of your cool story!
6Queen-KnightessSo far, so good! Love it! And did I mention I love Prosperity's nickname? Pro is AWESOME! I love where this is going. Goodness, leukemia. Didn't see that coming! But I'm glad Pro's alive. Wouldn't be much of a story if she had died at twelve.
Anyway! I'm going to finish the rest of your cool story!
1/2/2014 c13 2Isla Corinne
Aw! The ending of this chapter made me smile. I love that even though Accalia broke down in front of Pro, in the end she's still the same girl. A bit mean, but in her heart she's the most caring. Also, I like the follow up you did with Lena. You did well! Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait for more!
2Isla CorinneAw! The ending of this chapter made me smile. I love that even though Accalia broke down in front of Pro, in the end she's still the same girl. A bit mean, but in her heart she's the most caring. Also, I like the follow up you did with Lena. You did well! Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait for more!
12/31/2013 c12 Isla Corinne
Amazing chapter! I was really able to picture Accalia's and Prosperity's relationship to each other. It shows me a different side to Accalia too. That she's had to be strong her entire life because of what has happened to her.
I wonder what Pro will do now that she is older and she understands why Accalia has been and still is mean. Will she try to rekindle her relationship with her half-sister? Will Accailia even be open to being kind to Prosperity again?
Have a Happy New Year and I can't wait for your next chapter!
Amazing chapter! I was really able to picture Accalia's and Prosperity's relationship to each other. It shows me a different side to Accalia too. That she's had to be strong her entire life because of what has happened to her.
I wonder what Pro will do now that she is older and she understands why Accalia has been and still is mean. Will she try to rekindle her relationship with her half-sister? Will Accailia even be open to being kind to Prosperity again?
Have a Happy New Year and I can't wait for your next chapter!
12/31/2013 c12 1lord syyn
I always look forward to your updates.
The edits on 1 & 2 are good, I cant tell exactly where they are, though I believe I know. Its smooth and fits in really well.
As for the most recent chapter, the pov style goes a long way to explaining the hostility between Aca and Pro.
As always, keep up the good work :)
1lord syynI always look forward to your updates.
The edits on 1 & 2 are good, I cant tell exactly where they are, though I believe I know. Its smooth and fits in really well.
As for the most recent chapter, the pov style goes a long way to explaining the hostility between Aca and Pro.
As always, keep up the good work :)
12/29/2013 c11 2Isla Corinne
I think I am in love with your story. Seriously! I just started reading today and couldn't stop. Keep up the great work! I love how Darius' personality shines through in your writing. Things are getting very interesting and I can't wait to read more!
2Isla CorinneI think I am in love with your story. Seriously! I just started reading today and couldn't stop. Keep up the great work! I love how Darius' personality shines through in your writing. Things are getting very interesting and I can't wait to read more!