for Tomboy6/29/2022 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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1/4/2022 c18 anna Marry
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halo author, my name is Anna, i am a talent scout for fast growing platform, i am so interested in your work, i would love to give you an offer, may i know how to reach you professionally?
4/17/2021 c1 AvegaLil
It kept me completely enthralled all the way thru. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or
It kept me completely enthralled all the way thru. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or
12/25/2020 c18 Liane Kennedy
Really enjoyable read. Thanks.
Really enjoyable read. Thanks.
10/29/2020 c12 hannahward
Ha ha, rock in his shorts cracked me up lol. Can't wait for the next chapter
Ha ha, rock in his shorts cracked me up lol. Can't wait for the next chapter
10/29/2020 c11 hannahward
Things are going to be even more awkward with Jake if he knows about this. Glad she's talked to the others about Kyle still being the same
Things are going to be even more awkward with Jake if he knows about this. Glad she's talked to the others about Kyle still being the same
10/29/2020 c10 hannahward
Really liked this chapter and I liked that she's realized she was unconciously reacting to what Jake had said all those years ago by growing out her hair. And thank you for the extra chapters, it's a nice surprise! :)
Really liked this chapter and I liked that she's realized she was unconciously reacting to what Jake had said all those years ago by growing out her hair. And thank you for the extra chapters, it's a nice surprise! :)
10/27/2020 c9 hannahward
Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens in the morning!
Glad Dylan wasnt't an idiot with her
Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens in the morning!
Glad Dylan wasnt't an idiot with her
10/24/2020 c6 hannahward
I'm really enjoying this story. Glad that Jake stuck up for Kyle as well, and can't wait to find out how people react to him kissing Cam
I'm really enjoying this story. Glad that Jake stuck up for Kyle as well, and can't wait to find out how people react to him kissing Cam
10/23/2020 c5 anonymousnn
By the way, I definitely didn't mean to flame you or anything, it was just my observation! I'm really frustrated with the sexism and the creepiness of Jake. Jake gives me controlling, abusive vibes - he's "waiting for her to grow up", his restrictions on what she can wear and do, and his stereotypes of what a girl or guy should be or do. In fact, it's probably a testament to how well you've written his character! :) I'm not really happy with the development of them kissing. I usually enjoy tomboy stories, but I think the main character is too naive, I didn't really see any show of her strength, and I'm upset with how quickly she started becoming attracted to him. I wish there was more development - right now, it really feels like Stockholm syndrome to me...But I'm glad you're writing, keep writing! I'll read it, even if I hate Jake.
By the way, I definitely didn't mean to flame you or anything, it was just my observation! I'm really frustrated with the sexism and the creepiness of Jake. Jake gives me controlling, abusive vibes - he's "waiting for her to grow up", his restrictions on what she can wear and do, and his stereotypes of what a girl or guy should be or do. In fact, it's probably a testament to how well you've written his character! :) I'm not really happy with the development of them kissing. I usually enjoy tomboy stories, but I think the main character is too naive, I didn't really see any show of her strength, and I'm upset with how quickly she started becoming attracted to him. I wish there was more development - right now, it really feels like Stockholm syndrome to me...But I'm glad you're writing, keep writing! I'll read it, even if I hate Jake.
10/21/2020 c3 anonymousnn
Honestly I really hate Jake. He's disgusting, creepy, and annoying. I don't think he can ever come back from this to redeem himself as a love interest.
Honestly I really hate Jake. He's disgusting, creepy, and annoying. I don't think he can ever come back from this to redeem himself as a love interest.
3/28/2015 c2 
10Be My Valentine
Have you got an agent? Tell me, tell me, tell me! I mean the talk of deals and exclusivity is making me keel over in excitement. Good luck for your future endeavours x So no more posting on FP then?
10Be My ValentineHave you got an agent? Tell me, tell me, tell me! I mean the talk of deals and exclusivity is making me keel over in excitement. Good luck for your future endeavours x So no more posting on FP then?