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8/29/2013 c17 werciaforever13
Haha the last line of he chapter was funny :) im soo happy for cams mom! Anyways... great chapter :D update soon!
8/29/2013 c17 CeCe
THAT'S SOOO ROMANTIC!
8/27/2013 c16 twilightwinter
Love it so much please write fast! Can hardly wait for an update.
8/27/2013 c16 Hayit'Serenity
Awwww Happy Eighteenth Birthday To Cam .! Really Nice Sweet Chapter Update Soon Please .! Hayit'sSerenity
8/27/2013 c16 3SamaraL
Everything seems realistic and I wonder if Cam will go through with it. I think she will. She might surprise herself when she feels different afterwards. I would love to see more of a glimpse into each of their POVs after, what it is like, her emotions, how she might finally understand that sex does change things and for Jake, maybe, getting more protective of her. I am wondering if they might start talking about the future somehow.
And awesome author's comment - to those who are thinking of having sex for the first time. It's cool that you are reminding people about it. It's true. It does change things and if you tell yourself it does not - it won't be entirely true.
8/27/2013 c16 werciaforever13
Even tho this chapter seemed to skim by, it was still great! Im really enjoying the story :) update soon
8/27/2013 c16 Reader
I thoroughly enjoyed this book. The plot was wonderful and well developed.
8/26/2013 c16 CeCe
This chapter's really amazing! I agree with you whole heartily that you should wait until your ready to have sex. Also thank you for the shout out.
8/26/2013 c16 1CaityLightning
Great chapter : ) Justin is the cutest thing in the entire world! I'm fangirling over a 6 year old, Jesus, I need to get out more. But he is so adorable! Jake is hot. The way I picture him anyways. Update soon!
8/26/2013 c16 4Michelle1236
I really hope that they stay together for ever! I'm afraid something is going to happen and tear them apart! Because, well, this is a story and something always happens eventually. Anyways, I'm happy for Jake and Cam and how well their relationship is going! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!
8/26/2013 c15 Guest
1. I need to call my clothes battle armour now. 2. Can I HAVE a Kyle please? And a Jake too. Definitely a Jake.
8/25/2013 c15 5U MadeMyLifeComplete
I love this story! I read it all in one night and I can't wait for more!
Sincerely, Grace
8/25/2013 c15 3SamaraL
As usual, love this couple. Cuteness galore with meeting the family and kissing. I liked that she realized she loved him, when she felt uncomfortable in the bedroom. And how wonderful Jake is to be so attuned to her.
And love the mother-daughter talk. I did not notice how typical roles in a relationship are reversed, but also how she is starting to become a "typical girl" and get to a place when the roles are bit more typical for better of for worse.
Cam vs Madison- I had no doubt who will be no top.
I'm so glad they are together.
8/25/2013 c15 werciaforever13
So ive decided im really loving this book! No negative comments ofcourse :) update soon! :D
8/25/2013 c15 1leavesfallingup
Jake is definitely proving himself to be a much better person than his earlier behavior suggested. His respect for Cam is incredible in a teen boy of his age. Hope he wins his way into her heart for life.

An excellent story. It did seem like there was a drastic time-jump, but it wasn't really necessary to show every little bit of their early relationship anyway. At least she had the sense to give him a chance.
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